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Reviews for Movement Beneath the Water

By : ingrid
  • From CanadianGirl on July 21, 2010
    This story is quite beautiful and very sad and also very different from most of the stuff you find on this site.

    You capture Mai very well. The ending is terrific and the entire atmosphere is heavy and dark and almost hopeless.
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  • From Zanzenmaru on January 05, 2010
    very well done.
    4/5
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  • From ANON - Pat Squared on September 28, 2006
    Excellent characterization. I could see Mai staying with Zuko or killing Zuko with the same deadpan expression in her eyes. Sleep or Murder? - a question for the ages.
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  • From ANON - Prince Zuko on August 31, 2006
    Nice story i hope you make a sequel
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  • From ANON - WS on August 20, 2006
    Excellent story, can't wait to read more of your work.
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  • From ANON - Ivana C. on July 17, 2006
    I was skeptical, at best, in reading anything involving sex and the Avatar characters. I found your story and at first was merely curious to find out who Mai was. Then I read the piece, and now find myself extremely pleased at the reality that a well crafted, believable Avatar fic exsists. Wonderfully done, and very true to the nature of the characters. I applaud your work, and look forward to reading more from you!
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  • From ANON - Wicked Bitch of the West on July 17, 2006
    Wonderful, simply wonderful. The characterization was equisite in Mai in particular. I applaud this work.
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  • From ANON - looneyluna on July 15, 2006
    Excellent piece! You've given Mai motivation and depth without getting bogged in a bunch of history. I looked forward to reading more from you.
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  • From Spleef on July 13, 2006
    This was a truly excellent piece of work.
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