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Reviews for Just until I wake up...

By : heartofstone
  • From ANON - Lady Hawk on October 29, 2006
    ...ok you can't end it like that!!! I mean come on!!! please have it as a dream... or a nightmare!!! I want more plzzzzz!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 19, 2006
    that was sad and depressing but in a good way
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  • From ANON - Longjohny68 on September 28, 2006
    ah, man...

    Is it really going to end like this?
    I'm actually hoping that last part was Kim or Shego's dream.
    Maybe you could write an alternate ending version (with more chapters maybe?) :)
    I would really like to read more of your KP stuff.

    Keep up the great work!
    LG68
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  • From ANON - John on September 27, 2006
    Is that really the end? I can understand where the title comes from but it's just so depressing. I just can't imagine Kim or Shego just giving up like that and it seemed like they were determined to survive at the end of the scene. Plus your authors note made it seem like there might be another update.
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  • From ANON - ferer on September 27, 2006
    Sooo you killed them?
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  • From ANON - Tingtong on September 02, 2006
    Plz update soon!
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  • From ANON - Tingtong on September 02, 2006
    lol
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  • From ANON - christina on August 19, 2006
    plz plz plz update this story.. i just love it.. thanks for the great read
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  • From ANON - Toni on August 11, 2006
    OMG this is such a good story I hope you make a second chapter for it. I wold love to read more. And OMG the story has suck a good plot.. thinggy.... yea. Well thanks for the good read ^^
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  • From ANON - BlackestNight on July 22, 2006
    Hey, I loved it. Please write somemore. Thanx
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 18, 2006
    Very interesting. At first I thought it was going to be one of those stories where they're cold and the only way to stay warm is to get down and dirty. The bunker is very convenient indeed. I like where this is going though so I hope to see an update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 03, 2006
    Good setup to your story. I am hoping that you will be continuing it. I worry that as you have titled the first chapter as just 'Untitled', many potential readers will be immediately turned off and not bother reading your story. Please allow me to suggest two possible titles for your first chapter:

    1. Kim & Shego Escape The Collapsing Lair

    or

    1. Kim & Shego Escape The Collapsing Lair & Must Cooperate Or Die


    P.S. don't bother writing out 'Chapter One: etc.' like so many other authors do.
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  • From ANON - Kigo fan on June 30, 2006
    I'm glad you registered at the KP Slash Haven.You can call me prophecy,proph,or Shavonne over there.
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  • From ANON - Bloodyhawk on June 30, 2006
    Great start! can't wait for more
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  • From ANON - Kigo fan on June 29, 2006
    Good stuff.
    Are you going to post this fic on www.kpslashhaven.net?
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