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Reviews for Falling

By : JackHawksmoor
  • From maderine on October 22, 2007
    This was a really great read - just the right mix of sweet and hot - and what pleases me most is that you really nailed Elisa's character (no pun intended). "Every paranoid, stubborn, secretive inch of her." That sums her up perfectly. I would have no trouble at all picturing this as taking place within the series (well, except for the fact that it's Disney and all), and though it was largely just a sex scene with a backdrop, I didn't feel cheated. You really gave a good sense of the relationship and history of the two characters, and you didn't need a lot of background and buildup to do it. What was there, though, was really well written, and I never felt like I was just being stalled or set up for the smut.

    Again, this was just a real pleasure to read. I really hope you do more in the future.
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  • From HopelesslyEscaflowne on March 06, 2007
    Awww, that story was sweet. It made you feel that Goliath really wanted to be more intimate with Elisa but had held back for so long he couldn't contain himself. Really, this was a good fic full of raw emotion. I just wish you would come back and write more chapters about their deepenning relationship. ^^ I really hope you do.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 28, 2006
    Love this fic! Will there be more?
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  • From ANON - darkgodess64 on October 18, 2006
    Goliath and Elisa, always a good pairing, I love fanfic a lot, nice work!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - monet on September 18, 2006
    I liked this it's about those two got together man! Personally BKLYN always tickled my fancy.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 12, 2006
    Chapter 2 is very hot! Lots of sexual tension! The characters stay in character and I love Elisa vulnerability.

    I hope you will continue!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 12, 2006
    More Please?
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  • From ANON - Amy on August 10, 2006
    This is a great story. Will you continue?
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  • From ANON - Woo on July 20, 2006
    This is amazing!!! I love the slow build up. Definitely leaves us wanting more...
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 05, 2006
    Love it! Please write more
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  • From ANON - Wolvie on July 05, 2006
    Please Finish It is really good so far
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  • From ANON - zyn1213 on June 30, 2006
    Oh I hope you write more Goliath and Elisa. This is very, very good.
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