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Reviews for Tomorrow

By : LanShen
  • From ANON - Ravin J Rijhsinghani on December 29, 2006
    yo, after they have...sex....yes, make then do it, they love each other....make the final battle with ozai, yes, but make a battle with zuko too! before i mean. o, make it rite wen they r having sex, thatll make need 4 much cursing, insults and comments! that way, u kno, the alternate story line with zuko can have its....you know, thing. k, thts all.
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  • From ANON - penpaninu on February 11, 2006
    haha! I noticed you used the sex metaphor from Memoirs of a Geisha. Well done! Will you write any more chapters?
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  • From ANON - me on February 09, 2006
    LOL first avatar lemon i've seen. i had to lol at cutting to Zuko though; it's about to get more awkward i imagine.
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  • From ANON - darkness on January 04, 2006
    THAT WAS AWESOME!! next chapter please!! ^-^
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  • From ANON - a person on January 02, 2006
    that was sooo awesome....keep up the good work!! ^-^ I've been waiting for a story when Sokka walks in on them two...lol
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  • From ANON - etman93 on December 31, 2005
    AHHHHHHHH I HATE CLIFFYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Make new chapter soon this looks like a good story=)
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