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By : vampire
  • From ANON - christina on January 21, 2006
    omg, u so have to update this story is great.. i so have to read the rest.. i really hope u finish this baby
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  • From JdWheels on January 04, 2006
    Good story.... I think you can 'expand it'.

    Don't be shy, go for it!
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  • From ANON - Foug-s_Tofu on November 08, 2005
    Nice one.
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  • From ANON - Blaze on November 01, 2005
    Can you please post this story on the KP Slash Haven Board,I heard there is a lot of fans over there.Update Soon
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  • From ANON - Rae on November 01, 2005
    You can go to the KP Slash Haven Board,there are a lot of Kigo fans there.You can post your story there and ask for a beta-reader if you want.They can help you with this story,but I think this story would have to be in the mature section over there.The members over there are nice to people and they like to read new stories.Update Soon
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  • From heartofstone on November 01, 2005
    nice stuff there, but you need to proof read your work to get rid of a few little errors or get a beta to do it for you. other than that awsome, nicely written.
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  • From ANON - Black on November 01, 2005
    It could really use some commas and other symbols like '?' and stuff in the story. Other than that it's okay. Not that great but still okay.
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