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Reviews for Kisses

By : Kiryu
  • From RichardH on December 30, 2008
    first, you need to slow down and look for errors when writing, it may make it look a little better. second, you seem to have problems with your tenses (he pulled her in and kisses her).

    other then that, I'd love 2 see Ulrich get in on this
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  • From Ari22682 on September 20, 2007
    Not bad. I like how well written the scenes are, especially in the second chapter.

    Will you be writing more of this? I'd like to see Ulrich have his turn with the two ladies; I think that would be really hot...
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  • From ANON - Lucy McGonagle on January 14, 2006
    wow. Neo...Neo...Neo...*shakes head* just... wow. (yes this review kinda sucks, but I'm shock here...I never thought you to have that much of an erotic idea in your head...not like I hated it. *big fat grin*)
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  • From ANON - GhostLord on December 06, 2005
    Nice chapter, and story.This is really good. I hope you continue writting this, and if so update soon/
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  • From ANON - toamon on November 28, 2005
    That was great, you should do a full gangbang with aelita, ulrich, odd, jerime, and yumi next.
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  • From ANON - king on November 21, 2005
    jeremie is a PIMP!!
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  • From ANON - Smoke on November 15, 2005
    One of the best fan fics i have ever read keep it up please.
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  • From ANON - J-Bott on November 05, 2005
    This was really good !!!

    Just like your story Stormy Night.

    PLZ WRITE MORE !!!!!
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  • From ANON - T Rav on November 01, 2005
    So far, so good. You should do something with Ulrich and do something with Odd too
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  • From ANON - lordofstorms on October 26, 2005
    yo great story i liked it a lot i hope you do more =)
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