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Reviews for moving up moving on

By : LouandRo
  • From ANON - RAW19 on October 25, 2005
    once again: Damn!

    seriously though, having read the whole bonnie ballerina series up to here, i have to say i'm impressed. especially since i don't usually read fics like this. i'm happy to say, you are a very good author.
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  • From ANON - hentairoses on October 22, 2005
    Not bad at all not bad at all. I agree with the other that you done a good with the descripetion when they dance. I'm glda that you got Bonnie to stop thinking about Brick and Monique at the moment, but proablly be a litlle upset at her succes at getting Brick to pass his math class. Just don't get to over carried with occ without making it clesar as why a character would do something like that. Update!!!
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  • From ANON - Ryan on October 20, 2005
    Be careful about the M/F sex scenes. Try to keep the participents in character. How Monique behaved was a bit overboard for her. Otherwise I have been enjoying this series very much.
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  • From ANON - SM on October 19, 2005
    Great work; I appreciate the long and (semi) regular updating. I also enjoy the graphic and descriptive style. Many writers can't/don't do that well.
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  • From ANON - RAW19 on October 17, 2005
    one word says it all. damn!
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