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Reviews for Just A Quick One

By : LiesDee
  • From Krow on September 04, 2005
    Shoot, I meant to say before that this reminded me what happened to the Bride in Kill Bill 1. *shudder* Makes me hope I NEVER end up in a coma...
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  • From Krow on September 04, 2005
    I just realized that I haven't reveiwed this yet! I am SO Sorry! I must say that this in one of my favorites. I love how you have described(?) Zim's anatomy. But man, Dib is such a bastard. And don't listen to those plot needy people. It was great as it was. Short and to the point. Hence, just a quick one. Excellent writing style. Perfect for this particular story, in my opinion.
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  • From ANON - Florville on August 30, 2005
    This story, while quick and to the point, had a real underlying theme that was greatly disturbing (not a bad thing, of course). It was deeply unnerving that Zim remained completely unaware of these violations...it made it more disgusting on the part of the humans, the whole invasive performance of science placed alongside rape was quite poignant in terms of meaning, because when one considers the comparison, the two really aren't much different. And as I've mentioned in another review, that is one of my biggest dislikes about Dib's character on the show: his invasive view of science. Rather than study something while it is living and functioning, he'd rather rip it apart and study it in pieces like an inanimate machine. It's a horrible way of treating a living creature, even if that creature is intent on world domination.

    You've done a great job of this story; I like how Dib isn't the first one to violate Zim's person, and also how he doesn't allow anyone else to do it after he catches his staff member doing it, and yet there's no problem with him performing the same acts. In fact, Dib's derivement of pleasure from the acts, even cleaning out afterwards, seems even more depraved, digusting and disturbing. *shudders*

    Excellent writing, and I hope to see more of your work in future.
    ~Florville
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  • From ANON - Tamago on August 30, 2005
    That was... Um.... o.O It needed a plot...3-10
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