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Reviews for Her Eyes

By : noirebony
  • From ANON - Tama-sama on October 06, 2005
    Hmmmm, update soon? o.O I love this story, and would hate for it to die.
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  • From ANON - Florville on September 11, 2005
    Great chapter, I love how it adds a whole element of mystery and a sub plot to the story as well. And it's great that you kept the identity of the caller a secret...it adds tension to the story and leaves the reader on the edge. It's a pleasure betaing for you. Great work, I'm really looking forward to more!

    ~Florville
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  • From ANON - Florville on September 08, 2005
    AWWW!!!! I LOOOOOOVED this chapter! *LURVE* And yes, I got your email.

    I just love the whole concept of rubies and sapphires, and it was a great title for the chapter. Excellent work, that was a really nice touch, which I liked quite a lot. You have a real skill for setting...very poetic, you seem to be a very image-driven person, which I love in a writer. The image of the golden sunlight coming through in bars was awesome. A lot of people don't realise that those are the things that stay with readers; images that the writer can conjure in the reader's head. When you make someone visualise something, you create the picture and the story in their head. I could go on and on about how much I love that aspect of your style, but I must move on.

    Oh, and heck, I wanted to say, that was a good drawing you put the link up for. And I'm smacking myself now for being a total dumbshit; I never clued in to the fact that I could draw your character for you if you want. So if you want me to try my hand at doing a sketch of Moody, feel free to let me know. If you wanna see my other work, and if you haven't checked out my site yet, here's the link: http://florville.deviantart.com/

    *LURVE* And keep writing!
    ~Florville
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  • From ANON - Yaoifanboy on September 06, 2005
    :O

    No way! You get Florville as a beta! (I feel like I'm talking about her like an object... sorry Tallest Flor :( ) lucky! I have to make a fanfiction... I used to have ARCHIVES and ARCHIVES of Zim fics and other fics that I wrote... but they were all deleted... so yeah... anyways, good story so far, so yay! *lurve*
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  • From ANON - Florville on September 06, 2005
    I just wanted to say that I've been reading this story since the beginning, and I must say that this is the first time I've actually liked a story that contains an original character. Most of the others can just be written off as Mary Sues, but I really like yours, because it actually has a plot to it. Sorry I haven't really reviewed before now; I wanted to make a suggestion, though. While this story is excellent, I think you need a beta to fix up the grammatical errors. I don't mean to offend you, I hope I'm not *hides*...but I was wondering, could I do the honours? I'd love to beta your story for you, because it's really, really well-done and I quite enjoy it. Feel free to get back to me, my email is sugarsteph14@hotmail.com

    Again, I'm really loving this. *drools at Zim masturbation chappy*

    ~Florville
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  • From ANON - Yaoifanboy on September 06, 2005
    What's up with chapter 10? O_o
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  • From ANON - Yaoifanboy on September 06, 2005
    Wow! This must be the only recent thing on AFF.net that is Invader Zim and actually uses toys! I like this chapter a lot *devilish grin*
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  • From ANON - Yaoifanboy on September 02, 2005
    MORE SEX!! MORE SEX!! XD I like this story... glad you finally updated! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kharn on August 22, 2005
    Hey! more chapters! Very nice, odd plot though. Were could this be going...? Hoping to see more!
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  • From ANON - Yaoifanboy on August 18, 2005
    I'm beginning to really like this story! Please continue, and if you could, make the chapters a little bit longer, please? Thanks, I really like this story so far ^_^
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  • From ANON - Noberu-sama on August 17, 2005
    ooh, i like it! lol oh ZIM! lol yah its really moody here... lol. the story is good and usualy i only like one-shots ; ) but that was good. the evil teacher is ms bitters. "once i was a fairy princess too. it nwas wonderful, but then it all went wrong..." yeah. i hope you write more soon, and, uhm, yeah. see ya later! : )
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  • From ANON - yaoifanboy on August 15, 2005
    wow...second quickest sex scene I've ever read O_o
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  • From ANON - Yaoifanboy on August 15, 2005
    Well, I'm not partial to M/F stuff in IZ, ESPECIALLY not OC's, but I'm beginninninninninng to like this ^_^ continue!
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  • From ANON - Kharn on August 15, 2005
    Well, this could end up very nice. Keep going, love i so far!
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