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Reviews for All grown up-and how!

By : englishwitch2003
  • From retrom on September 25, 2008
    Wow, that was incredible. I loved how all the characters were so... incharacter. Dil was his silly self, and everyone's dialouge was worded exactly how they would actually say it. One thing that seemed off was Lil though. Its hard to explain but I just don't think coming out as a nudist is like coming out gay, and I felt disappointed that after being with Kimi she was straight. Thats just me though, it was probley for the better that way.
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  • From SunTsuToriden on June 18, 2008
    This was an exceptionally well written story. I love how you fit everything together.

    I'm a pretty open-minded person myself, so I found this story well written for the emotional level as well as the plot level. I look forward to reading some more of your work later!
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  • From ryuukoenko on August 11, 2007
    I like it. It's real, the characters aren't perfect or fleeting. I do wish you'd be more descriptive of the rooms.
    Constructive advice: maybe you could use your future descriptions of the rooms/places (if you decide to, since there's nothing wrong with your work) to generate a symbolic "mood" like if the room is dark, use that to your advantage.
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  • From ANON - Maverick on January 11, 2007
    I alwats love your work
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  • From ANON - Toamon on October 27, 2005
    that was great

    you should continue with that nudist camping thing
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  • From RWO on October 12, 2005
    READ IT
    LOVED IT
    will there be a sequel?
    i gave it a 5
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  • From RWO on September 29, 2005
    I liked this one.
    Too bad I'm not good at reviews.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 13, 2005
    good job


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  • From ANON - Xipponian on August 10, 2005
    OMG OMG OMG...this is the best story ive ever read in the rugrats section. You finally made it sound as mature as All Grown Up should have. Good job! Keep Going!
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  • From ANON - charizardag on June 29, 2005
    not too bad, keep it up
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  • From Daishi on June 07, 2005
    Quite nice, but am I the only person in the world who thinks that the more detail there is, the better?
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  • From SayuriNakamura on June 07, 2005
    Very nice. This is the first really decent Rugrats fanfiction that I've had the pleasure to read. It actually has a plot, it has lemon, and there's actually something going on that doesn't involve incest and rape. It's a good story so far--keep up the great work and update soon! :)
    Sayuri~
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  • From ANON - Unknown26 on May 18, 2005
    Yay! Another good Rugrats fic. I do suggest you continue. I do have a couple of suggestions, though. First, space it out a little bit. It makes it easier to read, especially when it comes to dialogue. Second, add more details. That's pretty much it! Other than that (which is my opinion), it's great! May I suggest Kimi and Dil? A little weird, but maybe you could consider it!
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