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Reviews for The Dream is real

By : SwissNights
  • From on March 30, 2007
    I hope you take bad reviews as well as the good. This story was a bit cheezy, and there were alot of spelling errors, but most of all. If she had been having the dreams since before, then how could he have taken her virginity that last night when she had found out? What had he been taking her virginity every day for a week??? I'm just curious, im not trying to be mean or anything, but you seriously need to look over the story and figure out if everything you've written makes sense or not before posting.

    And not everyone is going to like your writing, collective criticism is the key word here.
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  • From japanfanatic1985 on January 18, 2007
    I have enjoyed readingThe Dream is Real becuase it's a great story. A very good pairing^_^
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 30, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Kitten on June 14, 2006
    I love the story so far i wish you would write more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 09, 2006
    how she scream a niggas name wat she dont know
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  • From ANON - Lill on December 07, 2005
    WOW! That was great!

    Heh...MELIKE! ^_^
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  • From ANON - kiara on November 27, 2005
    make another chapter please
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  • From ANON - Dream_Toxin on November 25, 2005
    Damn, first Will and now Corny! These girls got it going on, but does both of them know that the other is in love with the enemy? Will knows that Corny is in love with the shopkeeper does she know that he is snake boy or is Corny just special?
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  • From on November 23, 2005
    Couple mistakes here and ther but good. Its good that you used Presant tense this time. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - anon on November 06, 2005
    Good story, but a beta is needed.... and no, I suck at beta reading so I can't do it... sound like a hypocrite I do'yoda speech*
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  • From ANON - mary on October 29, 2005
    This is good! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - kiki on September 25, 2005
    Please update I love this cartoon
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  • From ANON - kiki on September 22, 2005
    OH WOW I LOVED IT SO PLEASE MAKE SOME MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE LOVE IT SO MUCH LOVE IT LOOOOOOOOVVVVVVED IT .
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  • From ANON - megara on September 15, 2005
    sorry hit the wrong button the first time. i like your story please continue it.
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  • From ANON - AJAngelique on August 13, 2005
    OOOO! Someone else who read my mind about these charaters!
    MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!
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