Reviews for Time for a change

BY : slayer-of-evil

  • From ANON - AJANgelique on December 30, 2005

    script format is interesting but you make it kinda easy to follow
    this story is shapping our pretty good thus far

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  • From ANON - Damion Kitsune on September 09, 2005

    You need to read more (preferably published books, as they're more likely to be well written than stuff online), and learn from it. Your dialog and descriptions just fall flat. Also, although the script format may be easier to write than normal story format, many people (myself included) prefer to read normal story format.
    Finally, next time you upload a story, run it through a spell-checker first!

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