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Reviews for The Rival

By : JAAg18
  • From ANON - salem on February 02, 2009
    man this story is sooo bomb i hope you finish it soon, oh yeah what happen to bubbles?
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  • From ANON - Nika on December 11, 2005
    great. upate. oooo that ryhmed.
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  • From ANON - Matt on October 27, 2005
    I read the fan last night and the rival this evening. To be honest with you this new one is really dragging on and doesn't seem to have much of a purpose. It's still a good story, don't get me wrong, just reading it it doesn't seem like you're building towards anything. Oh well I'll check back in a few months to see if you've updated, hope you do soon! :)
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  • From ANON - Matt on October 27, 2005
    I read the fan last night and the rival this evening. To be honest with you this new one is really dragging on and doesn't seem to have much of a purpose. It's still a good story, don't get me wrong, just reading it it doesn't seem like you're building towards anything. Oh well I'll check back in a few months to see if you've updated, hope you do soon! :)
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on October 11, 2005
    Roaches, Claustrophobia, and drowning, huh? Okay. And nice to see Princess honestly kicking badguy ass for once. There's hope for her, yet. Well, try not to take too long with the next part, pal. Laters!
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  • From hairygregory on October 01, 2005
    This is a great fic, Jayman, honestly - sorry I haven't reviewed again in a while, but work's been busy (and 70 hour weeks tend to be quite tiring on me). I don't think I can actually tell where - if at all - this has been changed from what was originally posted on FFNet. My only real question is when we'll get to see how the strangeness between Buttercup and Blossom has developed over the intervening years since "The Fan" - especially given Blossom's dream in Chapter 2. :D
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on August 20, 2005
    Okay, this getting heated up. But what did demon girl want the kid for? Looks like it's only going to get more interesting from here... Laters!
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  • From ANON - Badgersprite on August 19, 2005
    FINALLY you've updated! YAY! I just have to ask, though, when is the Blossom/Buttercup-ness going to continue? As dark as it may be, I'm still a big supporter of any decently written F/F pairing!
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on July 18, 2005
    What tangled webs we weave. And where's Bubbles hiding herself? Well, update soon! Laters!
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  • From ANON - BadgerSprite on July 18, 2005
    You had better keep writing this. Don't make me threaten you. This is by far one of the better stories, at least plotwise, that I've read on AFF. I'm hooked, damn you! HOOKED!
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on June 22, 2005
    Interesting. Wonder why Buttercup took off, and where did she go? Well, update asap. laters!
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on May 31, 2005
    Okay, now we're cooking. Keep it coming, buddy! Keep it coming! Laters!
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on May 04, 2005
    Oookay... Interesting, moderately well paced(could due without Marysue, frankly). Update soon as you can.
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on April 17, 2005
    Ooh, nice start up, very nice. I imagine we'll find out who the other girls are rooming with next chapter? Update as soon as you can!
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