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Reviews for The Secrets of a Dragon

By : Norman
  • From ANON - lum awesome on January 30, 2013
    i read the entire story and it turns out that the huntsgirl turned out to be the dark dragon in desguise, so that means that the dark dragon kissed and gave jake a blowjob. continue this story plz. reply if you are... thx
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  • From ANON - ??? on October 28, 2007
    First of all, great story, really got me hooked. So, all of that was a dream? Jake ans sky getting married and jake dying? All of it? And all that stuff about sky's child hood was a flashback. Am I getting this right? Anyway, hurry and update.
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  • From ANON - jwolfe on December 15, 2006
    i really love you story and i would love to read it all the way through but i cant figure out what goes where so i was woundering if you could email me a copy of it in the order it should be read.
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  • From ANON - Kuroy on December 05, 2006
    i read your whole story again and now question why was Dark Dragon disguised as Huntsgirl? Oo
    I think I will read your story again and wait for revision and new chapter^^
    oh and if you can please send me a email when the new chapter is up
    PS: there is a AD:JL section on aff, perhaps you should post your revision there?

    keep writing
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  • From ANON - DOJO on October 29, 2006
    Finally finished reading all 11 chapters. It's got a very nice plot. I saw some spelling errors, but overall, It was one of the best storys that I have read on this site.
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  • From chainsawhero on October 02, 2006
    LOL! but a one other a thingy.... i a never knew a jake was a so mean...
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  • From ANON - Kuroy on September 09, 2006
    great story I love dragons
    are you making a Jake/Dark Dragon scene?
    anyway keep writing can't wait until the next update
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  • From ANON - SynjoDeonecros on July 19, 2006
    So far, I'm really enjoying the story. The conflicts and emotions for the fic really feel like what you'd expect in a darker AD:JL episode. Just a few questions, though:

    1. I find it rather odd how all of the magical community creatures seem to agree to the human standard of what is considered 'underage', especially creatures like the Anubians and Dragons, who obviously live for far longer than your standard homo sapien. I can sorta understand it with Jake, since he's a half-breed (with Human blood in him), and thus that would have some kind of impact on his overall life expectancy, but for Sky...I would think that he'd still be considered a youngling in his society, and thus, wouldn't be bound by the normal human age of consent laws. Neither would the Dragon Council, by that token. I just find it rather odd that the human standard of 18 is accepted by all other beings in the magical community as the age when one of their own can legally have sex.

    2. Was the dream that Sky had prophetic, or just the culmunation of his innate fears over losing Jake and what the rest of the magical community would do to them, if they found out about their relationship? I can see it being either/or, actually, and you don't have to answer if it plays a significant part in later chapters, but it's piqued my curiosity.

    3. Along the same lines as above, what WAS that that Jake sensed, after Sky's dream sequence? Has he formed some kind of mental connection to Sky in that instance, and it's Sky's self doubt and prejudice against dragons that he sensed? If so, would that prove that they were meant for each other? Again, you don't have to answer, if it plays a bigger part in future installments.

    4. One tiny bit of inconsistency that I found was Jake's comment to Sky when they first met, when he told the Anubinoid that he was straight. The inconsistency, here, is that in the first chapter, we clearly see Jake getting off by playing with his tailhole, up to and including using his tail to fuck himself. He obviously has no qualms with it, so his comment that he's not even remotely bisexual seems rather odd.

    Other than those, I really like the story, and can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
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  • From on July 12, 2006
    Holy crap what a freaking great fic
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  • From ANON - kyubi on November 11, 2005
    great story could use a litle grammer workthrough but still amazing story great plot and great use of imagery
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  • From ANON - Lizarman on October 31, 2005
    Nice fic! and a grat plot! I loved it! and i barely undestood it... I'm spanish ^^U
    please, upload more chapters... and I want to read more about the present of jake and sky... but finish the nightmare chapter frist ^^
    I want to read moooreeeee!
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  • From ANON - puppy on October 04, 2005
    So i have read your new addition and i love it and i can not wait to see what will hapen next i love this story.
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  • From Zantari on October 03, 2005
    It's a great story, it's just a same you killed jake. A revenge chapter is a must, and a chapter of something ebing done to bring jake back would be nice but not needed. You're story is a good insperation point since I got a chalenge to do a fan fiction for the first show I saw when i turned on the tv and this was it >.< Andway, great story and hope you do more later.
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  • From ANON - puppy on August 09, 2005
    I love the new part and i cant wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Mr.D on July 27, 2005
    Ive been waiting forever for you to update your story and its driving me insane i need to know what happens next.
    Sincerly,
    Mr.d
    P.S. please update your story
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