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Reviews for Family Secrets

By : Lumpkin
  • From ANON - Anon on October 15, 2006
    I liked it.
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  • From ANON - brian sheu on July 27, 2006
    make more chps...
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  • From ANON - DarQuing on June 28, 2006
    More please! One shots are nice, but longer stories are better! :D
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  • From ANON - muffinman on June 26, 2006
    yah dude add more great story
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  • From ANON - ??? on January 17, 2006
    I suggest you delete that post(and this one reffering to it). Thats not true at all. I mean first of all grammar was fine and even if not it was certainly good enough for an adult fan fiction. This is both adult and fan-fiction. Both are known for being notoriously bad in every way so I think this was very well done. In my honest opinon I'd give it normally around 7 out of 10. Although considering the competition I'd give it an 8 maybe an 8.5

    I won't lie and say your a great writer but you're far from bad. I happen to be a rather good critic in my opinion. I really don't like anything badly made in ANYTHING. Music, food, books. If ever accused of liking something bad its usually not true. Anyway trust me this isn't that bad ignore stuff like that. Please continue writing.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 09, 2006
    Fine. Here's a review.

    Your grammar sucks. Your spelling sucks. Your dialogue sucks. Talking about the dick size is amateur and irrelevant.
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  • From ANON - ??? on January 04, 2006
    3 things: She should mention that he's big for his age or something. I mean 6 inch is fine with me but she should've and would've said something. Also if you do a zack and cody fic eventually make them big too.(no reason really) Lastly nice fic please continue.
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  • From ANON - fleur on January 02, 2006
    i loved this story...i love all of your stories keep writing
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  • From ANON - TB13 on December 31, 2005
    Please continue,just to tell you,I'm a Violet/Mr.Incredible fan myself. Just to tell you. :3
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  • From englishwitch2003 on December 31, 2005
    An excellent start to what hope to be a long running series. I love how you used the fact they are supers to explain some things like Dash getting hard-ons so young. What will happen if their parents find out what the've done? Will they do it again? What if other people found out? I can't wait to see a chapter 2.
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