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By : Macelf
  • From Mac-man on November 21, 2020

    What if they tell Bob and Hellen, but it turns out they're not as angry about it as they thought they would be, because Dash and Violet are not really related? Let's face it, Violet doesn't look anything like the Parrs, it wouldn't be too far fetched for them to have adopted her from some very close friends, who couldn't take her for some reason.

    Dash is certainly their son, he looks like a miniature Bob Parr, with some of Hellen thrown into the mix. Violet doesn't look anything like either one of them, black hair, pale complexion, slender frame, even if you factor in grandparents, there would still be something of Bob and Hellen in her appearance, and there isn't.

    The only thing Bob and Hellen might be mad about is the fact that Dash is a minor, and still in highschool, and how irresponsible both of them were for having unprotected sex.


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  • From ANON - Anon on October 11, 2018

    hi MacElf

    I had a idea that Dash had a cousin named Ben Parr 

    and Ben & Dash liked Vi


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  • From ANON - Anon on October 11, 2018

    Hey can I be   a oc in the story


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  • From kaskisproxy on August 27, 2010
    Please if you ever get the chance please continue this story. It is very good and I look forward to how Violet and Dash overcome their problems.
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  • From on August 05, 2007
    Wow.. Just... Wow. I never even considered this pairing. Tonight I was bored and looking for something to read when I stumbled upon this story. You are my new hero. XD I enjoyed every minute of it. Your spelling, word choice, description, and plot was remarkable. Keep up the good work, and I'm definately looking forward to future chapters.
    ~Brittany Sambrano
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  • From stretch1989 on April 23, 2007
    Very nice
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  • From kriitikko on February 01, 2007
    Hmm, really interesting. Do send more.
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  • From ANON - Leon Priester on November 18, 2006
    good story your writings are briliant
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 25, 2006
    well made
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  • From ANON - derek on September 23, 2006
    hey i loved both of these storys there both put together very well and i cant wait for the third chapter. so plz hurry up and write it. make sure its just as good as the other 2.
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  • From englishwitch2003 on July 31, 2006
    the sooner you write chapter 3 the better.
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  • From ANON - Lil Shawdy on July 31, 2006
    yo dat wuz tight 4 some odd reason i like Dash dat way. He knows wat he wants doesn't he hope ya write da next chapter soon.
    (V)
    (..)
    C(")(")
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  • From ANON - Lyra on June 21, 2006
    Oh COME ON!

    You can NOT just leave it there! Please write more?

    I want to see the parents find out!
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  • From ANON - TB13 on June 14, 2006
    Well,the new chapter was awsome as expected. I'm glads that she kept the baby and I'm also glad that Dash wants to keep it. I don't think that Dash is the kind of guy that would say that he wanted Violet to get rid of it. I wonder how their parents will react! Can't wait for the next chapter! Your loyal fan,Tyler-a.k.a-TB13 ^-^ !
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  • From ANON - Nny11 on February 02, 2006
    Your next chapter should be very intresting. And I'm SO SORRY about your accident. That's just horrible, and I hope you continue to do and feel better!
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