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Reviews for The Wedding Night

By : victoria82
  • From JackAndSally4Ever on November 24, 2006
    wow, wonderful read. its always nice to find a victoria and victor lemon, since their aren't any around, besides the one playerpiano posted....i dont know if your familiar with marie XD if you aren't, i can send you two vxv lemons she wrote for me ;) they're an exceptional read.

    anyway, awesome story :) your right, it was out of character, but you did mention a girl can dream...always a good saying when it comes to lemon writing XD i look forward to more! :D
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  • From ANON - Lisa on November 19, 2006
    You are welcome!!!! Personally, I think that you earned all the compliments that I gave to your fics, and just so you know, I don't hand out compliments willy nilly. The writers REALLY do earn them. Additionally, Thank You!!!! for taking my complaints with your fics in the manner in which they were intended. I do criticize, but I don't flame. However, when I see something out of place in a fic, I won't hesitate to point it out to a writer. But, I try to do it in a nice way. I'm from the South (Georgia). And, we still set quite a store by manners down here. We believe that you can get your point across, but you don't have to be rude about it. Also, I would like to thank you for correcting the moment in the fic where Victoria actually lost her virginity. It now has a more authentic feel. I like the reference to Hildegard telling Victoria what to expect, and I love Victor playing the part of the gentleman (Southern gal remember. I like gentlemen. It's why period pieces are my favorite movie genre, and a big reason why I like Johnny. He's played in a lot of period pieces in recent years. The late 80's-early 90's stuff he did really never appealed to me, but I'm digressing again.) by offering to stop to avoid hurting Victoria any more. By the way, I'm still waiting for chapter 2 on the Sleepy Hollow fic.
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  • From ANON - Lisa on November 19, 2006
    Yes, it's me again. After, I read your Sleepy Hollow fic. I clicked on your name to see what else you had written. You are evidently a new writer to this site and based on these two efforts, I hope that you stick around. This was another sweet and sexy love scene. It was similar in some ways to the one that you wrote for Ichabod and Katrina. And Victor and Victoria are similar to those characters too; so, it is fitting for their lovemaking to be alike. The main difference that I noticed between the two stories was this one was laced with more humor. I chuckled several times whilst reading it. The most amusing moments were Victor jumping up "eagerly" to unlace Victoria, his nervousness about her undressing him completely, Victoria's "why my parents educated me at home" (chuckle), and finally, when Victoria called him a "horrid tease" and made reference to him not calling her Emily accidentally (snicker). I did have one complaint. Victoria should have experienced pain when Victor first entered her. I think that was an honest oversight on your part, but it really needs correcting. Other than that, I enjoyed this fic. I reiterate--You should write more fics. You really seem to be a talented writer.
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