Click Here!

Reviews for The Indecent Proposal

By : Phorpus
  • From BlueKnight on September 20, 2009
    If you ask me
    You did a really good job on this
    Although a part of me wishes that it was a bit more detailed

    Still good though
    But I cant help but wonder why there isnt any more of these pairings on this site
    Report Review

  • From HawkChic on August 17, 2007
    More? Please.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - KinkyCheshireKat on August 03, 2006
    yes, please, add another chapter! there were one or two things that in the first chapter that i think could've been worded and executed better, i adored the second chapter. cute for their first time, erotically forbidden for emily's cold flesh, shivering with ectasy for victor's succumbing to his desires, and sweet warmth for emily being able to feel and be free. loved the last bit with the repetition. lovely job. ^_^ i hope you do add some more, whether it be another one-shot type of chapter before the wedding, or maybe some events after the wedding (if you decided to have victor and emily be together).

    much love and writer's wishes,

    ~*kitty*~
    Report Review

  • From ANON - emeraldfires on February 03, 2006
    Morbidly good smut!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Sean on February 01, 2006
    Good story, please post your next chapter as soon as you are able to
    Report Review

  • From ANON - headnut69 on January 06, 2006

    it's good. please continue if your muse will let you.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - ab312c on December 18, 2005
    it was good while it lasted. if you are going 2 write another chapter, PLEASE make it longer and in better detail. Thnx!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Liz on December 13, 2005
    it's good, chapters could be longer....but I like it, it has promises of things that can happen later on...please continue,

    Liz
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Countess Flamette not sgined in on November 24, 2005
    That was adorable. Verysweet
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Countess Flamette not sgined in on November 24, 2005
    Wow thats so deep and sweet but at times funny. I love it
    Report Review

  • From ANON - The Summoning Dark on November 19, 2005
    There's a huge stupid grin plastered all over my face...and I don't care. That was awesome!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - gothicfantasy88 on November 09, 2005
    More detail! Make your chapters a little longer, or just go off the deepend with them! One shots are fun, but sometimes a little bit more detail is a better idea. I love it to death. I'm totally into the submissive/virgin idea of Victor, and his pathetic attempts to dominate in situations. I proudly support your work
    Report Review

  • From ANON - CoatPocketNinja on November 08, 2005
    That was...wow. Brave of you to write this sort of thing, and so well written a piece it is too. I dont know if EmilyXVictor is really nec, I mean, she is dead, but she's not really DEAD dead. You know what I mean. Anyway. Despite her being dead as she is, I'm a haardcore VictorXEmily fan, and this was, without a doubt, one of my very favorite Corpse Bride fics, if my my favorite. Please continue this, or at least write another story!
    Report Review

  • From Bishonen on November 08, 2005
    That was i good i sowre i would never read a nec fic but i just coul;d not help myself and another thing you must update or you will call down the wrath of my Samurai flesh eating pandas.
    With love; Imasuky Lomae
    Report Review

  • From ANON - CassieJo on November 07, 2005
    This was good! The first chapter was a bit awkward, but the second was lovely.
    You may have given me the courage to do my Emily/Bonejangles fic.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!