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Reviews for Triviality

By : mehmeh
  • From ANON - Damon Longshadow on September 21, 2011
    Hello guys( or girls, maybe..?) doesnīt really matter, does it- because this story is basically written from the omniscent perspective of one or two authors who know quite a bit about the technicalities of giant alien mechanoids` ways of "interfacing"( lovely, is that an original, or did you devise it? Absolutely plausible. And also a lot of fun to read, because itīs well written, has more depth than in any of the usual rather dull and/or meager teenage story combinations( as seen in the movies- which wasnīt too bad, but presented too prominent a focus on the humans for my taste)- and your perspective is considerably darker than most other Transformer-ff-spinoffs that I could find in the entire net. I am not too familiar with G1, but thatīs not a must to get thru this story here, because it relates expertly the underlying emotional turmoil of your prime (ahem, excuse the pun) "suspects"- great character rendering, which makes them very interesting- even megalomaniac Megatron isnīt too onedimensional either. Keep going!! Damn good.
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  • From ANON - NightShade on January 16, 2011
    yaaaay i love this story!! keep it up pleeease!!
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  • From ANON - shozurei on January 11, 2011
    Wow! That was amazing! How'd you learn to write fight scenes like that? I hope Rumble will be ok.
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  • From romanticfae on July 11, 2010
    please update crappy predicament
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  • From nekogirl1 on January 19, 2010
    Wow, soundwave & prime...and nasty prime at that! Curious to see what happens when soundwave is found out
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