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Reviews for Age of the Machine (Market Comodity 3)

By : Scienceteacher
  • From Rockinmuffin on May 20, 2009
    Review for Age of Machines 2:

    Huh… A Silverbolt clone named FiFi and now an Ironhide clone named Rover… I’m sensing a pattern, here. I’m waiting for one of the clones to be named Fluffy. xD Oh, oh! You know what would be the BEST?! A Tracks clone named Princess. Seriously though, the names are amusing me. I laughed when I saw one of them was named Beavis and the first thought that came to my mind was “Well, where’s Butthead?” *Reads further ahead* Oh, wait, THERE he is! Gosh, I can’t believe someone would actually name their clone that. Makes me think their original owner was a boy. But, yeah, I love Rover and his attraction to the Chromia clone is cute. Ironhide x Chromia are my cannon Transformers OTP.

    The thought of Jester, Flame and Inferno playing Monopoly is undeniably adorable. I don’t know why; it just is. And it’s nice to see that Inferno is starting to socialize with the others, so thanks for including him. ^_^

    Jester, don’t mock Groove. Seriously, you won’t be laughing when a herd of infected clones come and challenge you all to a dance competition to the death! …It could happen.

    D’awwww! *Cuddles Muffin* Best name for a Red Alert clone EVER. Of course, I’m sort of biased when it comes to muffins; I’ve yet to meet a muffin I didn’t like. And, goodness, Flame is the ultimate mega-bitch when he wants to be. He belongs in a high school with a gaggle of girls following his lead. xD

    Don’t you worry your precious little head, Opie. You’re in a smut story; you’ll get your chance with Scream sooner or later! xD And I’m glad that the barbed wire and sticks are gone now and replaced with something much more sexy.

    Scram’s desire for what he can’t have reminds me strongly of the real Starscream. He has so much, so many options, and yet he focuses on what he can’t have, thus increasing the want. Honestly, it makes sense to me and I’m glad that you made Scream this way.

    Nice chapter. Keep it up, girl! xD

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  • From ToonQueen on May 18, 2009
    Yay! Opie got saved! Rehabbing the bots seems to be interesting. The ending actually shocked me a little. At first I thought him and Fifi were going to have comfort smex instead. Poor bots. ;-; I liked the hole part about Opie being upset about having a spark. I actually touch on this a bit with my Sunny story towards the end. :O
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  • From Pax on May 17, 2009
    *huggles Opie* It'll be alright now.

    I'm glad that Scream might be getting what he needs with Opie and that's a loving, caring mate dedicated solely to him. Though it will be interesting to see how they snap him out of his current mindset.

    I hope next chapter they'll find a way to help the clones recharge without pain too...
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  • From Rockinmuffin on May 15, 2009
    Review for Age of the Machine:

    D: Optimus Prime a Decepticon sex slave?! SAY IT ISN’T SO! Don’t give up, Optimus! You’re the universe’s only hope. Sure, there’s Hot Rod/ Rodimus Prime/ The Worst Autobot Prime Of All Time/Etc. but, REALLY, do you believe that he can properly knock Megatron down and fuck the bastard with his own fusion cannon? I think not.

    Oh, wait… you’re that Prime clone from the one-shot with Tron, aren’t ‘cha? Aww, poor little guy. Poor fellow shouldn’t shoulder that sort of responsibility on his shoulders; even if it was the real Prime, no one mech could be blamed for such a thing, unless we’re pointing fingers at Megatron, of course. Seriously, poor little Optimus clone; I want to pull him to my bosom and comfort him.

    D’awww. D: The thought of all those abused clones hating their own sparks makes me sad.

    I’m so glad that the gang decided to rescue the clones. Sure, it’s going to be tough trying to rehabilitate them, but it’ll be worth it. I just want to see little Opie smile and be happy. xD Gah, Optimus clones are just too cute! And it looks like Opie has a crush on Scream… and it looks like Scream is curious too.

    As a side note, it gets kind of confusing when Opie sees Scream as a ‘she’ while the rest of the narration recognizes him as a ‘he’. I think I understand what you’re trying to do but it doesn’t really flow too well since the narration is third person rather than first person from Opie’s perspective. It would just be easier if the feminine pronoun is used for Scream only in Opie’s speech… if Opie ever worked up the nerve to talk about that pretty feminized Scream clone. ^_~

    Is it awful of me that I laughed when the Silverbolt clone’s name was revealed to be FiFi. It made me think of a French poodle. xD Poodles make me happy.

    And, geez, that bit at the end when Opie finally defragged was very disturbing. I can’t even imagine how abused someone must be in order for them to become conditioned to the point that they must be in pain even to get a little bit of rest. Seriously, barbed wire? Yeowtch.

    Well, I was glad to read this and especially glad to see what has become of Opie (It’s nice to know that he wasn’t forgotten) and I look forward to seeing more as this new adventure begins to unfold. ^_^

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