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Reviews for Already Broken

By : Breech_Loader
  • From ANON - Reaper on April 08, 2010
    Keep going. Its an awesome fic.
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  • From shozurei24 on August 09, 2009
    Poor Sunny. He's in really bad shape. Sides can't just give up on him.
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  • From shozurei24 on July 31, 2009
    Poor Sunny. He needs help bad. I wish he'd listen to what Tracks is trying to tell him. I hope this story will have a happy ending.
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  • From butterflies1974 on July 31, 2009
    I like this story and look forward to the stubborn Sunny finally getting the help he needs. And I really like how you wrote Track, his character is like any other person who wants to help but doesn't know what to do
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  • From Arcadius17 on October 25, 2008
    I love stories that are dark: cutting, eating disorders (despite my last comment), and torture (which you're famous for). They make me feel calm and good about my self. I know weird, right? I love this story the most followed closely by Pain without Limits. Wonderful jobs on both.
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  • From Arcadius17 on October 04, 2008
    I love this story even more. Poor Sunny can't seem to get through any conversation without getting it up the aft. I'm still guess of what happpens next. I got a pretty good idea but I don't want to spoil your will to write this story if I guwaa right.
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  • From Arcadius17 on September 11, 2008
    Fantastic story. I'm surprised no one else has reviewed this story but I'm guarenteeing you that if you cntinue, I will review it from here on in. You've develeoped the story well. My friend went through this ordeal too. I guess you could say I was like Tracks...minus the whole having a crush on him sorta thing. He was a huge pain in the ass but I helped him through it as best I could. Then the whole thing reversed and I was the one who became Sunny. I REALLY don't have a problem I got control over it, but the thing is, though, my friend who I helped through his time of need left me out to dry. Didn't really help with the whole thing. This story may bring back...not so fond memories, but it's wonderful and I love it despite everything I just said. Please continue with it you have an amazing talent and I'd be crushed if you held back on it. If you continue, which you should, I will definitely be faithful and continue reviweing even if I'm the only one. See ya next time ~ NetherOnyx
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  • From Dragolover2 on June 30, 2008
    As usual, an excellent chapter to a phenomenal story, but I have a few inquires. Like, why did you delete 'You Lost'? I absolutely loved that fic and I was really starting to feel for Bumblebee. I mean, I really thought Bumblebee was really going to join the 'Cons for Barricade and I really wanted to see what would happen to Bee. You know, how was Barricade gonna punish him and such? Please, from one TF slash fan to another, please put the story back.
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  • From Kettle on June 04, 2008
    Since my last reviews are gone and since I owe you a review anyway...

    Okay, I can get on board with the body dysmorphia/self-harm angle. That makes sense. So does the removing parts to get lighter aspect. ANd so does the pushing himself in training now that I think more about it - he's gotta prove he's the best. The avoiding refuelling/vomiting Energon still makes no sense, because again, how does refuelling make a Transformer gain weight? If Sunstreaker's fuel capacity is similar to a regular car's, then filling up will just add 0.5kg of extra weight (and I have a feeling TFs calculate their weight in tonnes anyway) which he's gonna burn off/excrete anyhow.

    Course, maybe something's gone totally wrong in his CPU and he just thinks he needs to sick up Energon to make himself permanently lighter.
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