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Reviews for Becoming Mama Bear

By : Breech_Loader
  • From Dragolover2 on January 04, 2011
    Ooh, suspenseful! Good to see you and the fic haven't died or anything. But speaking of half dead fics, when are you going to update 'Pain Without Limits', 'You Lost', 'Already Broken', and 'Drive-By Download'?
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  • From on December 25, 2010
    it good but disturbing

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  • From ANON - SS13 on February 21, 2010
    Aww, such a sweet moment.
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  • From tanisa666 on February 08, 2010
    I'm loving this fic, and can not wait for the next ^ ^
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 03, 2010
    This is the second time Hotwire was refered to as Breech. I cant remember what the other capter was. Did that use to be her name?
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  • From tanisa666 on December 29, 2009
    I wonder if you go further Becoming Mama Bear, I really loved this fic ^ ^
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  • From GabrielC on November 08, 2009
    OMG!!! I have just spent my entire sunday reading this from start to finish for the first time!!! It's really good. I like Hotwire very nice new character and you have all of the others' personalities excellently. I have thoroughly enjoyed it. I was really sad what the 'cons did to Prowl though :( Will they find out he can't stay undercover he's Prowl! Please update soon... I MUST know what happens... :P...
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  • From ANON - tanisa on September 23, 2009
    I'm loving this fic, I look forward update soon ^ ^ (sorry for my bad English)
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  • From Crossfire120576 on September 17, 2009
    OMG!! OMG!! OMG!! I have been waiting FOREVER for an update on this story! I am dying to know what happens to Hotwire and Barricade/Prowl!! You can NOT leave a femme hangin', can ya?? I really like this story. I read it a month or two ago and hoped you were gonna finish it!! Please let me know if my hopes are in vein!! Keep up the good work and bye for now!!

    Transform and Roll Out!!
    Cross_fire1205 aka
    Jaime
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  • From ANON - O.T. on July 05, 2009
    OoO

    Poor Hotwire! Poor confuzzled Prowl! Post soon! I must know what happens next! X3

    *checks every day for a revier*
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  • From Rockinmuffin on April 28, 2009
    Poor Prowl; one can only imagine how confused he must be. D:

    Still... It was really hot (and kind of cute) how he reacted to Hotwire’s attentions. He seemed so starved for affection. Then again, being among the Decepticons is probably an emotionally crippling experience even if you ARE one.

    Poor Hotwire too. This couple certainly has a lot going against them.

    Nicely done. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

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  • From Rockinmuffin on April 21, 2009
    My favorite part of the chapter: when Ramjet shouted "I don't hate Starscream!" Oh Starscream, you've got a personality that even YOU couldn't love.

    Poor Prowl. D: I don't want him to become a Decepticon. He's not enough of an asshole to be one! Lol. Still, you got to give a guy credit; not once did he given in during the torture, nor did he lose his faith in Hotwire. Too bad that now all his memories of the others have been deleted. Just a quick question; are his memories permanently deleted or did Starscream put them on a back up file so that he could use what knowledge Prowl had to his advantage?
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  • From Rockinmuffin on April 14, 2009
    Oooooh~ Muffin! *Munch munch*

    Nice chapter. Glad to see Bumblebee has finally realized his mistake, but, as usual, it's too late. Lol. Gosh, poor Prowl. Not only has he been betrayed by a friend and captured by the Decepticons, he's also had his secret past revealed to the whole world. Luckilly Prime is such a stand-up guy. I love him in this fic. :3

    HURRY UP AUTOBOTS! YOU GOTS TO SAVE PROWLER! D: Lol.
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  • From Rockinmuffin on April 10, 2009
    Hmm, Prowl originally being manufactured as a Decepticon, eh? Nice twist there. I have to say, my favorite line; "Fuck me like a Decepticon." If I ever get a boyfriend who's as geeky as me, I'm going to use that line and just hope he doesn't stick an electric toothbrush up my ass. Poor Bumblebee; there's little out there that is more emotionally scarring then hearing your "parents" making the beast with two backs.

    Also, you made me officially hate Oil-slick. xD Hooray for fan-based prejudice! :D
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  • From ANON - E on April 07, 2009
    Love ur story. Wish I could write like u. Well .................. Sorry realy bad at putting thoughts down.
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