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Reviews for Odd Couple

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  • From ANON - swift117 on March 16, 2010
    Yay dear, this was absolutely adorable! Erotic and all, but the ending...! Haha, Lockdown such a devoted lover. Totally dig this story!
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  • From LadyStarscream on February 16, 2010
    Hummm. Nice and steamy as always. And poor prowl. lol. Let's hope Lockdown never learns how to use a tatooing gun (whatever it's called) while Prowl is asleep. hee. :-D
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  • From wildmonarch on February 02, 2010
    Awwww...pardon me while I melt away in fluffy bliss. ^-^
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  • From yukikoangel on February 02, 2010
    So ... overly sweet and FLUFFY! Gosh, I just melt each time you upload
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  • From ANON - Piera Jade on January 15, 2010
    WOW. That was NIIIIIIICE....mwhahahaha. Totally love your Fanfiction.com fic and immediately went to this one! Can't wait til the threesome (or not?)! Keep up the absolutely riveting work!
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  • From prowlieandjazz on October 11, 2009
    So I FINALLY got around to reading this story (after reading all of Enoxx's gushing reviews) and LOVED it. Read the stuff over on FF.Net first, so this'd make sense. Prowl is such a prude, but hilarious as. I love Locky being portrayed as an albino. Best human/bot sex scenes! Will there be more?
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  • From AkiraYamamura on September 30, 2009
    BAHAHAHAHA! XD You have no idea how amused I am that /that/ was the cause of the first cheek-kissing...

    Also... I think I need to draw Prowler in an oversized t-shirt now. >>; The mental imagery is just too tempting. X3

    (Btw, I'm HitokiriKurisuta on FF.Net - pretty sure this is the first time I've reviewed for you over here, instead of just lumping the one for this in with the FF one. XD )
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  • From ANON - Evil Killer Poptarts on September 29, 2009
    Don't care, still want a gay albino Japanese baby. ;P

    Eee, this is adorable. I love how comfortable they become by inches and degrees until Lockdown gets all hot and bothered just by Prowl wearing one of his shirts.

    Also, lol, rent. XD
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  • From ANON - Fayola on September 29, 2009
    Oh my God. OH MY GOD. They -- fluff -- wha -- and -- the CONNECTION, and -- shirt -- so -- AUGH!

    Clearly, I do not have enough brain cells remaining to scrape together to form a coherent review. That would be because you've completely BLOWN THEM AWAY. They are GONE. 0_0

    I opened this with a slightly above average amount of glee because, corny cliche chick-flicks be damned, I love nothing more than puttering around in one of Boyfriend Roddy's old and tattered concert tees. Honest. And, as I've already (slightly shamefully) admitted to you, I think about this story during RL far more often than is probably healthy, so of course my mind has connected the warm fuzzy feelings I get when I put on that favorite U2 shirt with the fraying edges and the little hole right over Bono's face to the warm fuzzy won't-admit-I-feel-this-way-nope-never lump of in-total-love mush that is Prowl, and the little fuzzies inside hum happily as they imagine Prowl walking around the house in Lockdown's slightly questionable shirts. So. Obviously, the made me SQUEE rather annoyingly to see.

    But then YOU -- OH YOU. GOD. I had to go and fetch myself a bowl, I melted so much. This was just so bone-crushingly sweet. I... frag, just CANNOT GET OVER THIS. SRSLY. *wibble face*

    Now, if you'll excuse me, I need to go raid Boyfriend Roddy's room while he is at work and steal back his shirts.
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  • From ANON - swift hunter on September 22, 2009
    “I always liked riding shotgun.”

    *face-palm number one*


    “equipped with the most charming neo-nazi leather stud hat Agency funds could buy.”

    *O_o face-palm number two*

    “All it required was a little... in-depth negotiation.”

    Dear Lord...*number three*

    “You know any more—any that go with those pretty eyes?”

    *headdesk....number four*

    “C’mon, baby. I been watchin’ you squeak around in those pants for weeks. You’re drivin’ me crazy.”

    Oh God!!! *laughs...number five*

    “primly lifted himself onto the hood of the precious car, spreading his legs with a lusty creak.”

    Shit...you’re killing me here!!! *number six*

    “Prowl slid around and got onto his knees on the car with a cat’s grace, creamy ass raised just high enough to grab.”

    ROFLMAO *number seven*

    “Prowl frowned and thought about it, battered brain bumping into the sides of his head like a wandering goldfish.”

    XD...can’t...breathe...*number eight*

    That was hilarious...and very entertaining. When the conscience is away...the hormones will play. As lacking as Lockdown's imagination is, Prowl's mind is a corny, horny, cheesy beast.XD

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  • From ANON - Cordia on September 03, 2009
    You wanted to know how many face-palms I did right? Well the number was zero. That's because I was too busy wiping my keyboard from the nosebleeds while I was still burning my way through the story. Not bad plot but more like: Plot? What Plot?. Which is no problem for me. All I have to say is this: GOOD JOB! *thumbs up as a new wave of blood made it's way down my nose, again*
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  • From ANON - sontsunami06 on September 03, 2009
    ... Ok, lemme get my jaw off the ground here ::fumbles:: ok, i'm good XD

    I'm just blown away. Seriously, that was awkward and fumbling and Prowl was such an adorable little virgin, but it was still so well written. And so well worth the wait of work. XD I'm going to be good and not read the rest of these chapters until I get further into the bulk of the story, but just wanted to say wow. So very glad I'm old enough to read on this site ^_^
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  • From ANON - Evil Killer Poptarts on August 21, 2009
    Did I tell you how much I adore the latest chapter? Because I totally do. Especially how Prowl hits poor oblivious sleeping Lockdown and tells him it's all his fault. XD That was PRICELESS!
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  • From ANON - Fayola on August 20, 2009
    The hell -- Prowl, you are so messed up. I don't even blame Eno or Dem for this one, or even Lockdown. You can't create this kind of ridiculousness. It just exists. You are SO. MESSED. UP.

    And I love it. To bits and pieces. LOVE it. It makes me giggle and squirm in happiness, even as I face-palm myself repeatedly. (Last count was, I believe, eight.)

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  • From ANON - hannah on August 19, 2009
    Awwww you don't know how disappointed I am that that was just a dream ;_;

    It was niiice though. I love conniving-slut!Prowl much, much more than uptight-virginal!Prowl XD
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