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Reviews for A Forced Humbling of the Arrogant

By : DMtehficmonster
  • From Breech_Loader on April 17, 2009
    Yeah, Sentinel, beg you miserable fuckwad!

    As long as they don't fall in love, I'm good with this fic.
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  • From Rockinmuffin on April 17, 2009
    Huh… It was kind of odd imagining Optimus behave so… brutally towards Sentinel. Then again, I can kind of imagine it happening; a bot can only suppress everything for so long before it starts to eat away at his meta. I feel like this fic gave the boss-bot a chance to let out everything that’s been floating around in his processor that he was just too nice to clearly say before.

    Seeing Optimus act like this was quite out of character… but also extremely hot. Mmmm, methinks I could get to like this side of Optimus.

    It’s nice to see some Sentinel Prime smut. Personally, I like the guy. Yeah, I think he needs an attitude adjustment but I understand why he is the way he is, too. Besides, giant chin aside, he’s got a nice body. And the image of him all desperate and needy was really hot. >:3

    Very nice; keep it up!

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  • From Scienceteacher on April 20, 2009
    Well, hmmmmmm, wasn't expecting this one. The action was great. Was intense. Well-written. But somehow, somehow, I just can't envision Optimus doing this. Well, to anyone other than Megatron. But maybe the TFA Optimus is far different from the movievers/G1/Beast/Armada Optimus?

    Now back to my own work on the New Era... Granted the break was welcome. Thank you for making it interesting...
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