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Reviews for Jetluv

By : fishbub
  • From Rockinmuffin on November 10, 2008
    That was probably one of the most amusing stories EVER. There really need to be more stories about the seekers. I love how you portrayed Skywarp; my favorite part was probably when he entwined his fingers with the others while he’s watching them be intimate with one another. I just find that really touching. I’d love you forever if you decided to continue this.

    Just a note; I’m not entirely sure, but I’ve heard from several sources that the female seeker’s cannon name is supposedly Laserwave. I think the liar seeker is Ramjet too, so good job on that one. xD

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  • From Scienceteacher on October 23, 2008
    This was cute. Although the little Peeping Tom idea was very intriguing and unexpected. A little more descriptive writing - whether you choose to dive deep into Skywarp's emotions on the matter, or the physical activities themselves - would really do a lot to widen the scope of the story.

    Again, cute idea.
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  • From Breech_Loader on October 19, 2008
    An amusing, if short, oneshot. It would be nice to have it last longer, but it was fun to waste a couple of minutes on?
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  • From Dragolover2 on October 19, 2008
    Oh please write some more and add more descriptive interfacing scenes please!
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