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Reviews for Swallow The Moon

By : GhostHelwig
  • From on July 14, 2004
    Oh! This is so sweet! I think i've read it before but I don't really remeber, I just finished chapter one and oh my god! It was so sweet! You could just feel the love...I hate you now and forever.
    How can you write something so..perfect? You caught love and put it iwordwords, that's amazing. I envy you so much, your talent is far greater than mine.
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  • From ANON - Fate Sister Murasaki on June 11, 2004
    T.T That was so sad. And gods that scene where Double D dove under his covers chilled me. >_> That's exactly what I do when I go to bed. Panic at the dark and dive for the covers and then huddle under them. o_o Cuz I KNOW there's something there damnit. Don't tell me there's not.
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  • From ANON - Mysticlynx on May 11, 2004
    Heehee, another lovely chapter. You should make the mystery person Ed. He's finally sick of the way his two best friends are acting and goes up to Edd, snaps his fingers, and says: "Bitch, whatchu doin?knowknow that is highly unlikely, considering Edd didn't seem to happy to see the person that was there. Maybe its Plank, he wants a piece o that ass! I apologize for my silliness, but I really love this story and I can truly see Edd falling in love with Eddy for his 'cockiness'. I can see that being quite attractive in the teenage years ^_~ I loved that you brought up their first time. I was hoping for some reminisciand and Eddy's little 'sweet spot' left butterflies in my belly. Edd has the worst luck in the world it seems, something always gets between him and his love, and he never blames Eddy. If I did'nt thint they belonger together, I'd smack Edd for his self-less behavior. Keep the chapters rollin' because we SAVED THE EDS! And you never know what the future will hold. ^_^
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  • From ANON - FateSisterFwa on May 02, 2004
    Wow... I've never felt the urge to read any fanfics for this show. I think the idea bugged me hehe. But I read one of your fics from another site and found it again here. Then I found this one. I absolutely worship it. I was completely blown away by the way you can write such deep characters based off of a cartoon. I think it's more of a chalenge to do it for this than any anime, because our shows don't seem to put much depth into the characters. I've recommended this fic to every other person I know. Just... it's amazing. Please continue it soon! T.T I really hope Eddy and Edd get back together. I've become a fan of this coupling now because of this! ^^;; Just thought I'd let you know how much this fic is loved. You should have way more reviews, but I guess this is such a small fandom that it'd be hard to get so many reviews. I hate reviewing but I felt you deserved more for your hard work and dedication! Anyways... haha have fun w/ writting the fic and great job!!
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  • From ANON - Nekon¢¨ n on May 02, 2004
    I am glad my review helped you. Your story is coming along nicely and still flows well with this chapter. I was shocked with the beginning, but not at all dissapointed. I am definatly looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Neko-Chan on April 30, 2004
    It's so hard to find good Edd/Eddy fics, but you have restored my faith. I have read every fic you writed amd am also keeping up with this one. I must say your stories are great. I love people that don't treat normal cartoon fanfics as if they were below everything else. When I read these fics I want to read them as if I were reading just another anime fanfic. Plot development, IC characters, ETC. You have done all of that and I salute you.
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  • From ANON - darthelwig on April 26, 2004
    This is my favorite chapter so far. I want everything to be better already, but I'm enjoying the torture as well. No one does it quite as well as you do. Well, not that I've read so far anyway!
    Keep going. I LOVE this story!
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  • From ANON - Mysticlynx on April 21, 2004
    Read lastlast two chapters on your site. I always thought Eddy's chronic anger might have been caused by a lack of parental value, but you drove the idea home. You seem to be making a statement on gays and threntrents acceptance, but that could just be me. I understand Eddy's need to build a mask for himself now, It's scary that they both blame themselves. The last chapter made me rather nauseous, not because I didn't like it but because of Kevin and that little bastard Jimmy. I actually laughed when Double D said he was glad his shirt was red, so as to not worry about bloodstains. That is sooo Double D! I became nauseous whe Double D started coughing up blood, but i'm always sensitive to that kind of stuff. I actually exclaimed "HOLY SHIT!" (scaring my sis, i might add) when Double D made the comment on homosexuals to Kevin. I both laughed and feared for his life! The ending was perfect, when Eddw itw it was going to rain, but aren't all your endings perfect? Brava, please keep writing and if you dont put them back together I might be forced to smack you for all the pain you caused them to endure. You lil masochist you XD
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  • From ANON - Mysticlynx on April 09, 2004
    God, you're writing is beautiful. It's horrible that not many people have reviewed thus far. Although I have never been a big believer in an eddy/edd romance, you have portrayed it in a way that is believable and extremely romantic. Please continue writing. Yu have made a believer out of me!
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  • From on April 02, 2004
    *_* Edd/Eddy is by far the best EEnE slash pairing. Or at least I think so. Not too bad, you story made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside ^-^
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