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Reviews for Finale

By : Spacefille
  • From Melwyn on August 04, 2009
    Sequel!! I would love to see a sequel to this story.
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  • From ANON - SapphieChai on November 23, 2008
    ;; how come you quit writing??? Its so good!
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  • From ANON - Krimzon on January 21, 2006
    Oh my god! : “I WILL triumph,” Zim said haughtily. With that he crawled into the human’s lap and curled up against him, laying his head against Dib’s chest. He smiled to himself as he listened to the sound of Dib’s heart beat. For the first time in months he felt content. With his base back he’d be a whole new alien. His eyes glinted as evil thoughts wove through his head. He could take this planet. PROVE to his tallest, before he killed them of course, that he was worthy. That they had made a huge mistake, by trying to kill him. And after he was done enslaving the human race, he’d take Dib as his own personal sex slave. Make him mate with him time and time again. Oh yes, the idea was very lovely indeed… :

    Right there! Right there was PURE BLOODY GREATNESS!!! Holy IRK, you rule like none other monkey! Not only am I glad that you have continued to update, I am overjoyed that your writing style is utterly seemless, and even better! Though, of course, like the perv I truelly am, I would love to read more 'in depth' descroptions of one or tow of those sex scenes, BUT, you have proved time and again that such a thing is not necessary to make a GREAT fic!

    Dib's character is just so...real. Perfection. Oh, and GIR again! LOVE how him being without his doggie suit cramps his 'style!' Wonderful, wonderful job on Zim as well. I am still blown away that he is not only alive, but more sane without his PAK.

    You have really taken the unmade episodes and made something truely amazing with them. *applaudes* Can't wait to read more from you, you fantasmic person, you!

    Your loyal reader,
    Krimzon
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  • From ANON - Insanity on January 21, 2006
    Wow...I am completely ecstatic to see that you are going on with this story. This is one of my absolute favorite ZADR fics that is out there and to see an actual update on it has me just so happy. I have to admit I was a bit confused as to if chapter ten was the end, but now to see this and see that you are indeed going to go on with it, I just can't wait for everything else you have in store. I'm sure it will be worth the wait :)
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  • From ANON - Krimzon on January 19, 2006
    Oh my word, I cannot beging to describe how incredible this is. First of all, I have to mention the humor. There is just enough of the right kind of...unique Zim humor, and the Gir humpr was VERY well done. Most have a really hard time pulling off his particular brand of insanity. I cannot beleive how you managed to bring such humor into every chapter, and still maintain such drama.

    Oh Irk, and the dead smeets...that was really very sad, and I was beyond shocked when Zim's PAK rejected him, and THEN Zim survived! But ooh, I literally shuddered when Zim's eyes fell out....man, that was spooky. Oh my, what else.

    Ah yes, I understand perfectly about all the wonderfully bad things that happened to Zim. You have set the plot up INCREDIBLY well. the chapters are lengthy and filled with SUBSTANCE (something I love), and the character's emotions are wonderfully in depth. I adore how Dib, despite his softening feelings for Zim, still acts like an ass on occasion and even tried to convince himelf to just leave Zim. I ADORE how Zim is just so..Zim-like in his relationship with Dib. That little scene in the library was incredibly cute. Garge...there was so very much.

    I very truely wish I had been reading this from the beginning so that I could have given the praise you so deserve with every update, and I am incredibly overjoyed that you have kept this story alive, despite the lack of response for the most part. You have a loyal reader now..and prepare to have your story pimped by the me!

    Much lurve and respect,
    -Krimzon
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  • From ANON - Florville on November 02, 2005
    I just wanted to say that this story is incredible...I don't even know where to start in terms of feedback. You've developed the characters expertly, and I've seen in the last chapters that you're pushing the plot forward as well. This is certainly going to live up to the status of an epic. I admire your talent. This may seem like an incredibly short review, but I'm honestly too awed to put my feedback into words. All I can say is: keep writing. Your ability is amazing, and this story promises to be fantastic.

    Highest Regards,
    Florville
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  • From ANON - purpledemonz on October 30, 2005
    This is a wonderful fic! Please keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Tamago on August 20, 2005
    WEEE! The whole time, I was pictureing Zim&Dib, AND the Tallest Red and Purple..... Whats up with that? o.O Teeheehee. 8-10 It would have gotten a ten, but it didn't go into the sex man! Wheres the lurv!? XD If I were Dib, it would be damn hard not to lose it and **** Zims cute lil brains!! WEEEE!!!
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  • From ANON - amekan on May 02, 2005
    HI!! I really like the story. I've read it on ff.net, but it wasn't finished. Or was it? Anyway, i really like the plot and I'm just dropping this off as an encouragement. Love ya.
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  • From ANON - Suzu_no_miko on April 22, 2005
    Wonderful! Sensational! I love this and I hope you'll update soon.
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  • From StarwolfRealms on April 21, 2005
    I LOVE this fic... its one of my two fave Invader Zimfics!!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
    UPDATE! PLEASE! SOON!

    Seriously, you’ve written them so in-character that I could believe this story was a continuation of
    the show...brilliant!! I love the insults the two give each other. *Grins*

    I liked this part in chapter one especially, along with the part just after Dib catches Zim, when
    Zim’s in the lab, strapped down and Dib’s trying to think of him as an ‘it’.
    ( "No!" He yelled. "There has GOT to be some way to reverse it..."
    "Negative," The computer replied with a self-suffering sigh.
    That apparently wasn't the correct answer. Dib cautiously stuck his head out from behind the tube
    and watched as Zim angrily beat his fists against the offending console. "Well TRY HARDER!"
    He screamed. "You incompetent useless excuse for a..." He whirled about suddenly, and their
    eyes met. Dib froze. It took a moment, but then Dib's presence registered and the Irken's eyes
    widened. ) ***One of my two favourite scenes in Chapter one....***

    I just LOVE how helpless and sad and scared Zim is in chapter three... Poor Zim... it just makes me want to hold him as well... *sniff* He's such a cute little alien. And Dib, being so concerned and gentle... its touching! Really. I like this story a lot. Its one of my three fave Zimfics.

    ~StarwolfRealms~
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  • From ladylaguna on March 13, 2005
    I'm assuming there will be more, and I'm anxious to read more! Woooo. Very interesting concept with Zim's body... I was pretty sure that it would be something sexual, but I was definitely on the edge of my seat wondering what the "contaminant" was!

    I hope you'll invent some more interesting alien stuff as the story continues ;P I don't know why, but I've always loved seeing the variables people come up with in dealing with Zimmeh
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  • From ANON - Mehla Seraphim on March 03, 2005
    I have to say I like this fic. I'm still annoyed with myself for liking Ivader Zim slash lol...but It's still a good read ^^. I hope to see the next chapters soon.
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  • From ANON - Metranome on November 26, 2004
    Are you perhaps aware that a part of the story that was in this chapter before is no longer here? It's gone. You really ought ot think about re-uploading your fic, you know? And maybe finishing it, while you're at it.
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  • From ANON - Metranome on November 23, 2004
    Are you EVER going to finish this? Do you even come to this site anymore? DO YOU KNOW HOW LONG WE'VE ALL BEEN WAITING? HUH? HUH!? Finish the fic or don't write one at all! You drive people insane this way, ya know that!? Well do ya!? HUH!?
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