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Reviews for The Game

By : classiccowboy
  • From Zarrthtion on November 05, 2009
    that was a great story i really enjoyed all of ur works i hope you post more and i hope u expand beyond the universe of kim possible i would love to see your take on sum other disney toons :) keep writing
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 04, 2006
    I have read all four chapters at this point. This is one of the very best erotic stories I have come across involving Kim and Ron, so I was quite disappointed that you have decided to end it. I hope you will reconsider. If I might suggest how to continue the story have Shego blackmail Kim and Ron into continuing to have sex with her and maybe even trying to turn them into her sex slaves.

    P.S. Another kinky suggestion, should you rewrite chapter 3, after Shego gives Ron the blowjob have her go back over to Kim and share Ron's cum with her.
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  • From ANON - RAW19 on November 29, 2006
    most excellent!
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  • From ANON - dave on November 28, 2006

    Nice way to close out one of my favorite stories by you.
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  • From ANON - RI100014 on September 29, 2006
    Very nice lemon, like the fact that though you gave allowed us the K/S fantasy but still kept the reality that both of them were forced into the sitch. They lost themselves in it along the way, thats for sure, but they still weren't likin (specially Kim) the loss of control.

    Also liked the fact you stayed true to the K/R pairing all throughout the fic, that was cool. Hope you do the extended scene. Find it kinda funny Shego's such a slut but hey, the whole thing wouldn't work if she wasn't the horniest bitch on the block...;)

    Nice Job, Drakken threat from Shego kinda kinda had me lose my "buzz" for a sec. Gah! That would be like Kim getting raped by her FATHER, just Sick and Wrong!

    Keep up the good work, adios.
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  • From ANON - Jawelik on August 30, 2006
    Very nice story. There are a few pretty critical typos in chapter two and I think one as well, that I couldn't decipher, but other than that it was great. I have a real thing for strong dominant women, so this is naturally my kind of story. Look forward to any future updates.

    -Jawelik
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  • From ANON - dave on July 29, 2006
    This is one of your hottest KPs ever.

    I hope to see the conclusion before summer's over and its bact to school or work for everyone
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  • From ANON - Vash on January 26, 2006
    I loved it and I was wondering if you plan on doing more stores like this one about kim and ron
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  • From ANON - darkdeath on January 13, 2006
    that was one really good story i cant wait for the next chappi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - death on January 09, 2006
    pretty good but you could use more descriptive words as of pussy and other stuff.
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  • From dramaqueen101 on December 27, 2005
    That was one of THE BEST KP FICS I'VE EVER READ! That was awesomely wicked! Words can't describe how fantastic this fic was! MORE! MORE! MORE! XD! XD!
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  • From Doug4422 on December 25, 2005
    Dude, do I really have to say it, SLAMMIN' FIC !! MAJOR lemon at the end, me likey :-)
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  • From ANON - Cold_Chaos on December 20, 2005
    YES! Finaly, man I was wondering if you were ever going to continue this story. I'm so glad you did, its really cool. I just hope the next chapter won't take as long. Anyway later :)
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  • From ANON - blowjob on December 17, 2005
    damn that was tight made me want to cum
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  • From acsoundwave on December 17, 2005
    The story is great; it does seem to be a more...adult version...of the series.

    A small bit of advice: The narrator voice(that's you) should avoid using words like "pussy". It makes the story less satisfying. Nonetheless, I understand that it's your first lemon.

    Keep it up.

    -- acsound
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