Reviews for Depravity FallsBy : GeorgeGlass |
I love this story. I wonder about Dee though... shades of Bill Cipher?
Mabel and Dipper are adorable together, you really express both their innocence, delight, and excitement as they learn more about each other and sex. The scene with Wendy was hot and I hope there's more soon. I wonder how strong their powers of seduction/persuasion will get and who and what's next.
Also, the thread about Pacifica's second job and Dipper's reaction needs to be unraveled.
Thanks for writing and sharing and definitely looking forward to more!
Who will make the first move Dipper or Mabel my money is on Mabel
I was fairly certain that today was going to be a shit day, so imagine my surprise when one of my favorite authors drops the first chapter of a series. I have been a fan for such a long time and I am very very excited to see what you do with this series. You have an incredible knack for capturing the tone of a show and mannerisms of it's characters. Kudos Mr. Glass.
Liking this so far. You really nail the humor of the show and I found myself laughing several times during Mabel's various recollections.
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