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Reviews for Morty’s Mind Control

By : JamesRyder
  • From inaba on March 22, 2022

    didn't see that ending coming but knew Rick would be back, but I'm sure Rick wouldn't have just blown up the citadel, he probably would have taken it over.. also it was a potion he drank in the first chapter in a test tube not a pill witch you said in the fourth chapter


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  • From ConanEdogawa on March 16, 2022

    Poor Morty


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  • From inaba on March 08, 2022

    only the deff stand in his way.


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  • From ConanEdogawa on March 07, 2022

    You gotta be on Morty's good side


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  • From inaba on March 06, 2022

    story is good so far but any R and M fan's know that Rick is to damn smart to die.. at least the Rickest Rick.. cause he already did! die and he had a chip in Morty's head that half forced him to bring Rick back to life by taking a sample from Rick's dead body with a device in the trunk of the car bring it back to the garage and clone him.

    so I'm just waiting to see if in the end Rick is dead and Morty brings him back or if he faked his death and is watching this all unfold.


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  • From ninesenshi on March 05, 2022

    Chap2 I guess it's just set-up but you went too far with Jerry.  He's not EVIL, Rick always treated him badly and Morty could have gotten rid of him in many other ways.  Also from a world perspective, it's better that the powers that be don't know Rick is dead.  It's just asking for trouble.  Morty should have kept that quiet, just made out like Rick is off somewhere doing something.


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  • From ConanEdogawa on March 05, 2022

    @LunarSilver

    I would love to see Arthricia since he did risk his life for her


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  • From ConanEdogawa on March 05, 2022

    Lesson here is don't be a Jerry


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  • From Lunarsilver on March 04, 2022

    I'm thinking he finally has the power to be with Jessica, also maybe Tricia Lang just for fun


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  • From Angry_Ricky on March 04, 2022

    Getting a real kick out of this series thus far.

    Any chance you'll be putting Simpson Sleepover back online at some point? If not, is there a way to request an archived version of what you had before you pulled it down? It covered some uncharted territory in the Simpsons erotica space that has been sorely underexplored by other writers.


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  • From ninesenshi on March 02, 2022

    Cool story.  looking forward to more.  Time for Jessica to finally put out .


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  • From ConanEdogawa on March 02, 2022

    Now you gotta ask yourself Will Summer remember what Morty did


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