Reviews for My Wish Is Your CommandBy : GeorgeGlass |
Wow... the depravity of Bart. The epilogue goes someway towards washing out the sadism, but also shows in the very end just how fully power corrupts.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Lisa turning the tables on Bart was unexpected but if anyone can do it, it would be Lisa always. Great job with this story!
thought it was good overall but the ending ruins it, it's just incredibly lame in every imaginable way, I'd suggest either tossing the last chapter out and replace it with a better ending
Im going to head cannon and say that Lisa wish brought her to a alternate universe where she was in charge and left a copy of her behind.
A 10 as usual.
I'm curious about what being "on the treadmill" means here though. I'm guessing it's not really supposed to be answered, but I'd still like to know...
Nice twist ending!
I enjoyed the story as a whole, Bart the God-King, but having Lisa find the lamp was an amusing ending. Poetic.
Hey George, still enjoying this series and looking forward to more chapters.
Now that Bart has been breeding Springfield and we are seeing the first generation of his daughters reaching fuckable ages, it would be great to meet the offspring of some recognizable Simpsons characters. Bart promised he'd breed Jessica during her chapter, and of course Lisa and Maggie are tempting targets since he's threatened them with inbreeding so often. But we could also see the results of Bart having his way with Majula, Ruth Powers and her daughter, maybe Mindy from the Power Plant, who knows. I leave it up to your imagination!
I continue to love everything you do with this story. I somehow missed two chapters that got posted and had to catch up.
Just wanted to say that I'm really enjoying this story, and the misogynistic slant you've put on the nigh-omnipotent Bart. I'm only sorry that the story is already past the point of canon ages, since 8-year old Lisa is the version we all love best.
Would love to see Bart have some fun with some of the one-off female characters from the school (besides Sherri & Terri). Nikki McKenna, Jessica Lovejoy, Allison Taylor, Gina Vendetti, Mary Spuckler, ect.
I am loving this one. You have a great writing style and a hot story going. Keep it up.
After finishing Flesh I looked for more stories that were like it but couldn't find anything until this. I'm so glad you decided to write another story like Flesh. I feel bad for Homer though. He was just killed by his own son.
Grant's feats are more impressive that Barts though because he didn't have ultimate power to do what he wants. He broke his family slowly.
Another great story from one of the best authors on this site.
I can see why Bart would want to go to school and as an idea maybe Bart could have Jessica Lovejoy naked and clean out Lisa and Marge of his cum then blow him before getting her turn of being fucked in front of everyone as they here her moan like a genuine slutty whore, it might be embarrassing but she secretly gets off on servicing Bart in any way he likes in front of everyone including her dad. Bart could say "Looks like Jessica was baptized in dirty water" then tells her not to lie in church because he knows she loves doing this in front of anyone that is willing to watch including her dad. Jessica replies while moaning "Yes I love having anyone watch me get fucked like the little slutty whore I am".
To much?
All I can say is damn wish it started out with their first time
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