Reviews for Biological ImperativeBy : GeorgeGlass |
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Love the story and the ending
you should have mertle's friends and mom join them.
chap8, good to see LifeGuard.
`ya l’il space-fucker' hilarious
Hope to see her and Nani making out in future chaps. Hope to read more.
Not sure who else might get involved. Maybe reincarnated Elsa and Anna?
Enjoyed chap6, sexy times with Nani. Less enjoyed 7 with it's Mertle focus. Now that Stitch is expanding his pride I hope Nani lures the LifeGuard into this..
While this is much more intense than I usually enjoy, you put in these little moments that help bring me back into it. I honestly applaud you for being able to walk this line. I really enjoyed seeing Lilo and Nani enjoy things, or at least need to for satisfaction in chapter 6. And hope we get to see Lilo entirely enjoying having sex with Stitch. Though bringing in Mertle should be fun. Can't wait to see where this goes! I check almost every day to see if there is an update.
(One minor error of calling Lilo by the name Nani when Stitch pops her black cherry.)
I definitely prefer the happy, lovey-dovey stories you have done, and generally like when the girls become horny little beasts too.
But Stitch is pissing me off in this, though it is interesting at least and kinda enjoyable now. Personal preference I suppose. I do miss his quirkiness and humor for sure.
Where is Jumba to explain or revel in all this?
I agree with Sailor Nemesis, and if the girls are going to be recruiting anyway . . . Nani needs to introduce the Lifeguard to the joys of double-dong dickings. Her body is built for sin and I'm sure Nani could easily convince her to come over for an undisclosed reason. Nani already seems fallen to Stitch's prowess and would probably be eager to share and corrupt others. Maybe Nani could even warm her up a little first?
Plus, it would be fun to have a girl who isn't an anal virgin, cause I'm certain she wouldn't be, and she could totally be a major size queen. Having her barking like a bitch in heat as soon as she realizes what is going to happen and sees the massive dicks would be a fun change of pace.
Especially considering Myrtle looks to be next and I can't imagine that being anything but super rapey and full of tears. And maybe some revenge face-sitting by Lilo while Stitch works the other end? That'd shut her up. Put her rude mouth to good use even.
"Meega nala Struggle-snuggle!"
This story is amazing. I just wondering when are you going to continue it and if Angel will suddenly get activated and appear in front of Stitch while he is fucking Lilo or Nani and give him the relief he wants and deserves.
Chap5, a bit harsher then I like but sexy. In order to spare Lilo so much fucking, Nani should bring in the LifeGuard to share in appeasing Stitch
Excellent balance between horrifying and horny-fying in this latest chapter. If we hadn't seen how completely indestructible Stitch was in the film I'd be rooting for Nani to try stopping him. How much more can the girls put up with before it becomes noticeable to everyone else that something is wrong?
I hope stitch realizes he has two cocks and girls have two holes down there. The anal passage will absorb his alien hormones or whatever just fine. I hope he does this with Nani soon.
Chap4, good to see another chap. I'm looking forward to more Nani. Maybe she can get the LifeGuard involved too!
Will there be a threesome between Lilo, Nani and Stitch?
Chap3, very sexy. Not really into the body modding especially on Lilo. But Stitch and Nani is really hot.
I've been waiting for Nani to make her appearance and it didn't disappoint. Hopefully we'll see that second dick of Stitch's really come into play besides painting the ladies even though I do understand the story purpose for it. I saw someone else mention the lifeguard and I admit I would be nice to see her brought in to help give Nani a breather but if this story is about Lilo's and Nani's own little hell then that's fine by me too. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
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