Reviews for Conjugal visitBy : Fanfictionfan360 |
This is a fun story. It has some punctuation issues, but it's a good read. Things I particularly liked:
-The bit about the pro-Ozai rebels and that ending the war didn't end the violence. This seems very realistic in a historical sense.
-The surprise of Aang slapping Azula. I didn't see it coming, but Aang's words afterward made it make sense. And it just figures that Azula would be turned on by someone who did that to her.
-The detail of Azula's eyes crossing when Aang shoves his cock all the way into her mouth.
-Azula wanting Aang to impregnate her because of the consequences it would have for them both. That seems like the kind of devious idea Azula would have.
Ah damn, pretty sexy story here my man. Just a shame that it ended as a dream, lol Keep up the good work!
Nice work, m8.
Maybe her next dream will be her getting fucked by her brother?
I wouldn't put it past that depraved cunt.
Keep it up
JMAHWK
Thats what you GET, you lightning cunt!!!
NO PLEASURE!!! ROT IN JAIL!!!
Meanwhile, *I* will be happily schlicking!!
Keep up the great work!
IBTS
Fantastic as always, the way she just kind of fucks with him in the end like that had me laughing. You did a great job here.
Loved it
That was very sexy. Would like to see it happen for real and across several chapters. Please write more.
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