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Reviews for The More, the Merrier

By : GeorgeGlass
  • From Yahegai on June 10, 2023

    Quite the excellent sequel that satisfied my desires and eyes


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  • From FairySlayer on August 06, 2020

    Wow! That's a lot of action for me to catch up on, but I'm really glad you got it all out of your system – and into all of theirs. :D

    It was wonderful to see Monty & Vanessa furthering their common interest (and appendages) in little things, especially in the form of Sally. (Much as the girl loved it, I hope Monty has access to OWCA's mind-erasure technology in case she accidentally spills the beans.) Nice to see Vanessa could make the doll thing up to her. I was a bit more surprised that she didn't have a problem with her Uncle Roger turning up, and it was even nicer that they connected on a whole new level.

    Like with Sally, great job with Pedro's opening exposition to place him in the show as well, and nice work tying into an episode. (I can't remember them all, but I did look up Kelly Clarkson's IMDb and it all clicked.) Good to see that they got some good lessons and even had some fun together. Always helps when you're not the only new kid in class. (“Aren't you two a little young…?”) I'm sure pretty soon they'll be double-teaming Gretchen like everyone else. (Surprised Monty & Vanessa didn't get to her this time, but they were plenty busy.)

    Want to hear something funny? All throughout the first story and until mid chapter 5 I thought that Balthazar was the name of  the PaF fanboy, Irving – talk about weird mental images! What made me double-check was when he finally used his Jedi skills on Adyson.

    By the way, Vanessa's sisterly mentoring relationship with Balthazar was a nice touch on top of Melanie's self-appointed role as his teacher. Actually there were so many nice little mentions of various non-sexual bonds forming around the group that it added some nice camaraderie and warmth to the club members' relations. Heck, you could almost call them a big family.

    …which leads to the Dr. Hirano's very good news. It's a great little note to end on, though thinking about explaining the family dynamics may be a bit difficult at times… especially when Candace hears. You just know she'll sniff out that something odd is going on and make it her mission to bust them. It's not like they can let Candace in on the secret because she'll spazz out the moment the incense wears off.

    Oh boy… Now I'm imagining Candace and Heinz teaming up to find out what's affecting so many of their friends and family, eventually busting in on a session:

    “Jeremy! …Suzi!?”

    “Perry the Platypus!  …VANESSA!!!?”

    Thanks for more of the fun, sexy, and very rich tale of hardcore relaxation.


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  • From ANON - Anon on August 03, 2018

    Want more.


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