Reviews for SplinterBy : GeorgeGlass |
The ending was superb
The alternate ending was also superb
Good work
Holy shit...this is dark, creepy, and yet pretty fucking hot! I love it!
I do love how you wrote the good and bad ending. That way we can be satisfied with either one, but in the same time we won't be left to wonder about the alternative. It was a good move on your part to add the bad ending as well.
Not enough Priyanka action in my opinion, but oh well.
I especially love how in the end, it wasn't just the Splinter that influenced their actions. The fact that deep down some part of them were still in control just made it that much hotter! Nice.
Happy Writing!
Now this is how you end a story. Glad you took the time to make the chapter and I hope you have a good day.
I aprreciated the alternate ending
You may need to do an alternate ending where the Splinter stays in control.
Chap 6, sigh, boring happy ending. Ah well.
I'm really loving this story, my kind of thing wink wink, I hope to see more soon dude. Maybe with jasper or bismuth.
I enjoyed chap4, hope to read more soon.
i am liking this story more and more! cant wait to see how it ends!
This story reminds me of Stress Relief which is a soul eater fanfic where Crona has a harem. The difference being is that in that story it's was to relieve Crona from stress and so far medusa is the only on pregnant. I really do enjoy this story so far and I can't wait to see what will happen next
Suprisingly, I'm enjoying this and hopefully, Pearl can get Sabrina (what her canonical name could be) in on this.
Chap 3 was good, the action is getting better. I hope the Splinter wins, perhaps changing a bit in personality due to Steven.
Enjoyed chap2, keep it going
Has potential, bring on the creepy rapey. Hope for preggo sex.
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