Ok, I just want to say that I've re-read this story from beginning to end for the 3rd time this week. I'm not kiddding, this story is that amazing. Like I was never in the loud house fandom and haven't watch the show in years at this point. But Lincoln and Leni were always my two favorite of the siblings and I've always shipped them as I felt the two had a certen charm together that no other character had. So let me say good sir that the way you've written you to not only feel in character but out right like a continuation of said characters if writers were to make a loud hous sequel so with the main cast all grown up. God I love the way you've written Lincoln and Leni's relationship, how it's clear as day to the reader that Lincoln clearly shares the same feelings for his sister as she does him but refuses to come to terms with them and stop being in denial until Leni not only corners him but also floors him with a confession that had 0 years worth of build up. And god the lemon, the lemon. Im a guy who enjoys lemon but never in my life would I think that a chapter dedicated to lemons would feel so earned and satisfying. The ending of chapter 5 and midpoint to chapter 6 hit me like a brick, really letting me know just how much Leni has been forced to suffer due to Suppressing her feelings for Lincoln.

Please, I beg of you, don't let this story be discounted, make a chapter 9. Please!!!!!

Happy New Year Doctor! I'm leaving this message here because I don't know what other sites you may be on. I hope you are well, I've missed reading your work this last year. Wish you the best in 2022!

I've been a lurker here for quite some time, I've followed this story from the very beginning, ever since you started it more than 3 years ago, and I have to say, this is one of the best stories I've ever read for any fandom. I'm sure you know this well, but it can be so hard to find well-written stories. I've seen so many great ideas ruined by authors with poor grammar or authors who tell too much or authors write everyone OOC. It's been such a breath of fresh air to read your story, and I appreciate how much time and work you put into each chapter. I do hope you update soon, but no matter what, whenever that is, I look forward to what you with the myriad of intriguing plot lines you've set up.

Dios!! Esta historia es demasiado fascinate, soy un gran admirador de tus historias y, pienso que eres el mejor escritor (de habla inglesa) de "the Loud house"

Dios!! Esta historia es demasiado fascinate, soy un gran admirador de tus historias y, pienso que eres el mejor escritor (de habla inglesa) de "the Loud house"

Ditto on what Anon said, RIP in peace pastebin ;A;

You won't understand how I felt when I looked up to your pastebin page as usual and couldn't find anything

By frantically checking out that writing of yours were safe here, I regained my composure lol

After that, I heard that pastebin is setting posts to private so no one but the author could read it

I'm leaving this comment just in case you don't know about it

I'm really looking forward to seeing the next chapter of MIWC by the way Your fics became driving force of my life recently

My usual collection of play-by-play thoughts, this time on chapter 8 (SPOILERS):
--I liked the way Leni describes how the model should walk while wearing her dress (swoosh-step-swoosh). It's just very Leni, yet it communicates the idea well.
--I also like that Leni is so deeply familiar with the vocabulary of her trade. She may not be a genius, but I embrace the idea that she can really focus when there's something she's deeply committed to (something I touched on myself in "The Loud House After Dark").
--Also, you must have done quite a lot of research on this topic. Or else you didn't and you're just faking it brilliantly. :-)
--I like how Leni falls back on her old speech pattern when she says "I'm, like, the one that made it." It really gives the hint that she's upset.
--"Clothes...wear you just like you wear them." Interesting perspective.
--I would think that a clothing designer would have concerns about hiring a white-haired boy as a model. Lincoln might only be 21, but the white hair no doubt makes him look substantially older, at least at first glance, which may or may not fit with the target demographic Valenti has in mind for his men's clothing. Another concern would be that this unusual feature might draw viewers' eyes away from the clothes.
--I love Leni's thought that Lincoln would be a good model because "he's really cute and good at holding still." That seems exactly like Leni-reasoning.
--When Leni quotes Lola's opinion of Valenti and says that she's sure Lola wasn't just saying it to be nice, my immediate thought was, "Does Lola ever say anything to be nice?" :)
--I love the way that Valenti uses the story of the cousin he loved to broach the subject he wants to discuss with Lincoln, because I assumed that it meant he knew (gasp!) about Lincoln and Leni's incestuous relationship. And then, when Valenti's actual request of Lincoln was that he convince Leni to stay in New York, that was a wonderful sharp right turn after that sharp left.
--Valenti's excoriation of fashion journalists made me laugh. "They loathe the humble, they despise the sincere, and they will gleefully attack anyone who hasn't proven themselves." Valenti's diatribe also made me wonder if maybe you were channeling some personal feelings about those who sling mud at creative types like you (while creating nothing themselves).
--At the end, when Lincoln is looking down at the people on the street below and thinking about their "glamorous big city lives," I found myself imagining just the opposite: young people scurrying from their closet-sized apartments to their entry-level jobs as gophers and office drones at investment firms and publishing houses.

Thanks for another interesting chapter.

Couldn't he just move with her?

What is the point of this angst, when he could just move with her? He's pretty much her assistant.