Reviews for The Couch GagBy : GeorgeGlass |
Those Loud kids, what a bunch of clever devils. Another amazing story GeorgeGlass!
Fuck, that was both funny and sexy. Will there be more chapters, or was this a oneshot?
Should put the no sex tag
Angst seems a bit much, it was more comedy and a good one at that.
I wouldn't have tagged it angst, that was hilarious!
This was a terrific bit of fun, especially for such a great tease. Leave it to Lola to come up with such an evil plan… but for a moment there it almost felt as if the kids were starting to enjoy it too. Maybe they're just good actors when it comes to getting out of trouble; or perhaps as they started to get into their routine they were a bit scared by how well each's counterpart seemed to be responding.
Either way, Lucy's final analysis was perfect, and I love how they all immediately sought out ways to cleanse themselves… completely separate from everyone else. Luna's, Luan's, and Lisa's side-comments all fit in very nicely too. Thanks for the family fun.
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