Reviews for A Better SisterBy : Flagg1991 |
Some comments:
--I would have liked there to be some sort of precipitating event to trigger Lori's soul-searching in chapter 1. It seemed to come out of the blue.
--I chucked at this: “She didn’t know who Lincoln’s favorite band was, though she was fairly certain the name had something to do with lips. Kiss? No, that was a silly name for a band.”
--I was a little surprised at Lori so easily getting sexual with Lincoln when she and Bobby seem to be going strong. Maybe she doesn't think of it as cheating?
--That aside, that was a beautifully erotic scene, made more so by the connection that Lori and Lincoln begin to feel during the act.
Will be checking out the sequel.
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