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Reviews for A Perfect Picture of Affection

By : AberrantScript
  • From DoctorYnot on November 11, 2017

    Wow! This is fantastic! I mean, don't get me wrong, I would have preferred a little more...I don't know, something to detonate them maybe. The look in his eyes, a kind word telling them not to worry about him. Just a slightly slower burn, a look at what had been building up in them anyway to result in this explosion. I know length was the factor there though.

    But man! The story was incredibly hot. All those little details, the motion and misdirection, the way one sister corners him into the other until they meet at the middle. Threeways aren't easy but you really choreographed the whole thing beautifully. And the interplay with all their emotions and visceral, predatory reactions mixed in, that razor's edge between love and hunger, that was my favorite part. Not to mention lines like 'he arched his back like a rainbow'. It's a great contrast to mention something so nostalgic and innocent and place it in the context of what they're doing, it ends up having an amazing messed-up-yet-erotic feel.

    I had a great time reading this story; I really think you knocked it out of the park. I see you have a few other ones so I'm really looking forward to checking them out after this. And hey, if you can, shoot me an email at ElCidStVicious@mail.com. It'd be cool to chat.


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  • From Flagg1991 on September 18, 2017

    Another AS homerun. You know, girls, I happen to have a healthy amount of emotional wounds, too...hint.


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