Reviews for Changing the GradeBy : Magmos |
wow didnt see that coming. cant wait to see what happens in the next chap
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I would say a jasmine story would be a good idea, can't wait to hear what she has to do for agraba, after Mr. Mus leaves the back room with Bonnie and Monique I think Monique should have a difficult time walking straight because after Anon had sex with her.
You think Mr Mus might get tranfered to another school? Maybe a little place called Monster High?
This was very well done, if Tara felt so good from anal sex that she blacked out until Bonnie's moans woke her up, I just wonder if she'll make a very sexually exhaustedly satisfied and broken face after giving her first time to anon (eyes rolled up mouth open and tongue roll out) could anon be so good at sex including fingering that he makes that face appear on the girl or girls during sex and after every time anon has sex with with his girls.
at the end you have Bonnie misspelled as Connie, that being said lets not forget about Connie and Lonnie Rockwaller getting put in their place. And a parent teacher conference about Kim and Bonnie's apparent "pregnancy pact" ends with Ann Possible gravid herself......
man 3rd chapter was great. cant wait to see what happens in the next one maybe u could have one or all the girls at teh mall getting new clothing and run into the teacher there and give him a show trying on different outfits and it leads to some more fun? but anyways still great job
what a second chapter. so looking forward to see if kim and bonnie now will get another girl to join the fun? maybe tara? have to wait and see. keep up the great work
Wow just wow that was another awsome chapter, maybe Tara should join next, even though she could be a virgin but not an anal virgin because she wanted to save her other virginity for the one and shows that she's easily to embarrass but that's because she has a bdsm kink with being the submissive so her when Kim and Bonnie find this out they knew she would be perfect for anon so to show anon how much they love being his sluts the two girls tell Tara if she wants to actually experience her kink for real then she would join them serving anon. Anon loved the idea of tying up his girls so much that the next thing all three girls knew they were lined up bent over anon desk naked next to each other wearing nothing but bondage rope, (shibari) with there hands tied behind there backs and were blindfolded, another sees his girls are wet and ready. Anon said to his girls pretend I have a camera capturing every second of this (he actually put a real camera on a standee in front of Tara to capture all three girls on camera after he tied them up and blindfolded them) tara is in the middle so she gets anon dick and about to lose her virginity to her new master while kim on her left and bonnie on her right get their rope pulled and fingerd by anon between there legs digging in there pussy. The girls climax at the same time, before they climaxed they kept saying how good there master was making them feel and want to be his sex slaves, after the girls were laying on their stomachs exhausted/satisfied anon took only there blind folds off so the camera could see all three of there faces on camera, (eye's rolled up, mouths open with her tongue sticking out, (define ahegao) they were so out of it they didn't know anon actually recorded them on camera getting there very satisfied faces on camera. The next day the girls were sore but had an after glow a lighthouse would be jealous, the girls were at Kim's house for studying house when a post man came over delivering a package the girls opened it to find inside was the bondage rope they each wore and a camera they didn't know anon used, a note was attached saying only my sluts can access this camera with the password "master" anyone else trying to access the camera will explode. I will use this camera to record all your future training and you'll watch not only to review your performance but to enjoy watching yourself fully submit to your will to me, when i call you for training i expect you three to wear the rope exactly like before even under your regular clothes and even during cheerleading practice consider it your uniform when i call on you three because i don't want to leave any one of you out of the fun i have planned for you three sincerely your master anon, they were shocked that he actually recorded them and surprised at how submissively turned on they are by anon/master being so dominant with them but also couldn't wait to be called on again and possibly recorded again as they're enjoying watching themselves on video moaning along with the video as they masturbated to it.
What do you think will this work with whatever you have planned for the next chapter, but if this is the end then I hope this is a good idea to use for your next story
Nice job on chap 2.
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This is a very well done story, of all the traps Kim escaped from I think if Mr. Mus was a villain and if he trapped Kim, like she's standing and her hands are tied together with rope that's attached to the ceiling so her tied hands are above her head then Mr. Mus does what you describe to her and by the time he's done and backs away from Kim to look with pride at what he did then Kim lifts her head to look him in the eye with nothing but pleasure and ask for more after she lifted one leg high enough to be next to her head, who could refuse a request like that, so of all the traps I think Kim would like that one the most.
Another fun story. I don't like stories of sexually aggressive girls with men, so no. Girl on girl is good though. Please don't obsess about protection. Real life is full of safe and realistic sex, fics should just be fun.
Kim should be the aggressor with Miss Go
have to say its pretty good. and hope u make another chapter to this story in the near future
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