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Reviews for Sense of Semblance

By : sandman-nobody
  • From Verecoth on July 29, 2021

    Truly fantastic. Another of my favorite stories, though sad to see this has fallen by the wayside a little. Any chance we could see more soon?


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  • From IceStar on April 10, 2020

    Just so you know I literally made this account so I could make this review

     

    I love your style of writing and everything about it feels more like a romance novel where the sex is good but they're so much more your stuff's worth waiting for And I can't wait to read the next chapter I'm just glad you're still writing it


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  • From JA19930415 on April 05, 2020

    He thought he might be hallucinating for a second there... I loved it! I waited for this chapter for an entire year. Let me tell you, it was worth the wait! I suppose there's a reason that this story is my favorite active story, by far. The heart to heart between Weiss and Jaune was beautiful, especially Weiss' portion of it. And considering how awe-inspiring Jaune's side of it was, that was saying something!

    How could she love someone so stupid? I seriously think Pyrrha needs to issue Weiss her membership card :)

    I just wanted to let you know, that I've enjoyed your story so much that I finally registered with the site just to leave this review. Please keep up the great work, this chapter made my month!


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  • From Lunarsilver on March 17, 2019

    I think that jaune should have a harem with Yang, Weiss and Pyrrha. The girls would not only love the idea because the three can share jaune but also have kinky foursome sex and with jaune semblance he could easily fuck three girls at the same time ;)


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  • From ninesenshi on January 13, 2019

    Chap 10, this continue to be a fun story, though i really wish there was some more full on sex.  Well, fingers crossed.


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  • From Lunarsilver on January 12, 2019

    Hope the girls Jaune knows/used his abilities on all stick with him the entire day  ;)


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  • From ninesenshi on November 24, 2018

    Chap 6, very sexy, great detail on the sex which is so important.  I wish he would abuse his power more, i dislike the moralizing and author assurances that he will `not go to far'.

    Still very enjoyable, I hope for more like chap6.


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  • From ninesenshi on October 30, 2018

    Chap 3, read your note.  Personally I would like a darker path for this story, but I'll see how it goes.


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  • From ninesenshi on October 30, 2018

    Chap2, sexy, I hope he goes much farther with Yang


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  • From ninesenshi on October 30, 2018

    Chap 1, promising start


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  • From TheMahoneyParty on January 05, 2018

    Look, I love this story but PLEASE let Jaune and pyrhaa be together! I still wanna see jaunes exploring but let theme be together!!!


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  • From notherAnonymousPleb on January 03, 2018

    Thanks for the chapter. It was quite long but it was built up really well so I enjoyed it. Keep up the great work.


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  • From notherAnonymousPleb on November 03, 2017

    Welcome back. I have been waiting for this story to update and I am glad that it has. It has been a great premise and I seriously enjoy the slow build up with this. Exploring the possibilities takes time and the more time it takes the more possibilities in that time. I am really curious how people will turn out after this.


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  • From TheMahoneyParty on October 14, 2017

    You would have to be a fool to let this story and vault 69 to die! Update!


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  • From notherAnonymousPleb on March 17, 2017

    I have been looking forwards to this for a while and can't wait for the next chapter.


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