I'm finally getting around to actually posting the comments I wrote down when I read this fic last week. 

--I won't lie; I was a bit disappointed that the threesome teased at the end of "Afterparty Pressure" wasn't realized in this fic. But at least you provided an explanation for why it didn't happen. 

--I LOLed at Mabel's misinterpretation of Wendy's statement that her father often gets the family a deer on Christmas.

--I liked the revelation that Wendy misses her pre-adolescent body. Not only does it further explain her attraction to very young girls, but it's also pretty hot. :-)

--Mabel wearing holiday-themed underwear is great. Totally in character. As is her line “I feel sparkly.”

Thanks for a fun fic and all the edgy Wendy/Mabel action. I enjoyed.

it was adorable.

It was hot.

It was impressively close to the tone of the show.

Kudos.

Don't know why, but I actually forgot that you post your work here, too. Awesome to see that you're still writing, and that you have vested interest in my favorite Disney show. And your work is impressive as always. Everyone's in character, the plot pulls you in and the action keeps you in. Outstanding work as always, EF!

Awesome story, definitely would like to see a "Mabel on Wendy next morning" part 2. But please keep it just plain oral, too many people go right to 69 or tribbing.

SPOILERS!

Well, Mabel set out to give Wendy a wonderful Christmas (especially compared to what she thought was Corduroy tradition) and she succeeded beyond either girl's wildest dreams. For me as the reader it was pretty freakin' awesome too. Best Christmas ever!

The plot was just perfect for Mabel, stubbornly defying everyone (and the weather) in order to spread cheer to a good friend whom she loves. It was wonderfully in-character plus very sweet. The descriptiveness of her journey and the build-up of just how bad it was getting out there was intense, and it was a cute that her eccentricity in sweaters is what helped save her.

One big surprise was that Dipper had noticed Mabel's absence and called around, considering that I thought Pacifica's plan was to enjoy the warmth of his Yule log all night long. Of course, his concern for his sister is undeniable. (Or maybe Pacifica suggested a three-way with Mabel and then nothing was going to stop Dipper from finding his sister!)

You did a fantastic job portraying Wendy's mix of strong emotions about Mabel's stunt: anger, fear, disappointment yet when she really gave it to Mabel she didn't go too far. She wanted to make the point, but not make Mabel feel like a bad person. Of course, the first hints of Wendy's ideas about how to take advantage of the Mabel, er, the situation were starting to creep into the picture, yet I still felt that Wendy's truest feelings were of love and concern.

After Mabel drifted off to sleep and Wendy began her maneuvers I found myself holding my breath too. The slow, careful steps she took were captivating, and her frustration at holding back from her wildest desires actually made what she could get away with all the more delightful – both what she did to Mabel and the satisfaction she gave herself.

Then after she got away with it, all was tranquil and sweet and HOLY FLURKING SNURT! The Cylon-Reindeer-Ghost was totally random but just perfect for the show, and it made me laugh so hard just by showing up to scold Mabel and supposedly teach her some sort of lesson. Wendy's reaction was hilarious when the being explained it was going to show Mabel all the trouble she caused Wendy, and after she found she couldn't interrupt the image and fell on her face, too hopeless to move an inch it was so funny I didn't need to know Mabel's immediate reaction. Again, I almost died with how quickly the being excused itself and zoomed out.

Thank goodness Mabel's curiosity was stronger than Wendy's utter shame and embarrassment, and it was quite touching that Wendy actually explained so much about the different reasons for her attraction to younger girls. It was quite poignant actually, and that sincerity probably helped Mabel open up about her own feelings about the affair. What luck that the younger girls' curiosity and trust also happened to be what Wendy needed to do what she wanted the most as well.

Their lovemaking after that was quite beautiful. Appreciation may not have been the biggest feature, but it was certainly mixed in with all the lust, hunger, daring, and playfulness that they experienced. It's not surprising with Wendy's skill and pent-up desires that she wore out the already-exhausted little girl, but knowing Mabel she'll be eager to keep her promise in the morning.

Also, I liked that you tied in some "Afterparty Pressure" and contrasted Wendy's scarier, even violent side when it came to her attractions. (Of course, that was also a complicated situation, and to some degree Wendy was acting out of caring for the one of the twins.)

Oh man, TLTR I know – it's been an exhausting day and I really just don't want to miss all the things there were to love about this. Thanks for sharing, and welcome back.