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Reviews for Make It Wit Chu

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  • From ANON - fartquad on November 11, 2016
    my god that was awesome.
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  • From ANON - on November 07, 2016
    dude awesome story. well so far but I like where ever thing that goes on in the story. I resumed that luan is next. but anyway can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Rwr on November 04, 2016
    God I thought this was going to be just lori raping linclon. and the part with leni I can still forgive but luna I'm not so sure cuzz after she just got up and feeling drowsy and guilty for what she did, she still do it after what happened. great fanfic man keep it up.
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  • From kenton_jen on November 03, 2016

    Love it! I can understand Leni and Luna wanting to have sex with Lincoln, but I hope the author will explain why she decided to rape Lincoln. 

    My money is that it has something to do with her and Bobby.


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  • From ANON - anononon bae Don lie on November 02, 2016
    Ok the part where luna just poured down that alcohol on linclons head and just straight up licked it is just why of and hot. and finally at the where she goes back to Lincoln room with another bottle my reaction was ''oh not again''. but anyways great story pal I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - FilthyFrank on October 31, 2016
    not my proudest fap but I'll take it. nice story dude.
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  • From ANON - thinking_rectangular on October 30, 2016

    I want to feel bad for Luna but I cant ;-;


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  • From ANON - RandomReviewer on October 29, 2016

    Here is my brief review of my experience with 'Make It Wit Chu': Despair, but also a boner. Very good story! I assume Luan is next? I can't wait to see how she handles this situation!


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  • From ANON - ass licked on October 29, 2016
    Oh man sweet Jesus how the fuck does linclon get fucked so easily, I mean if I were him I would have shot them all down. But that a side, nice story dude.
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  • From ANON - Nina bullocks on October 27, 2016
    God this was just dark too read but at the same time interesting story line. I don't usually come a cross good story like this and this is by far the best. keep up the good work.
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  • From Fattius_Pattius on October 27, 2016

    Sweet Jesus, this is madness. I was so giddy seeing this new chapter up; maybe Luna'll understand, I mean, in the back of my mind I knew it couldn't be true, but maybe. Then he told her, and I was like "yes nigga, serve the justice." but bam, back into the darkness we go.

     

    This dude is going full Clarissa, except on a much wider scale. These three chapters have hurt the shit outta me, shit is soul crushing. Barbaric, some next level sad shit.....

     

    I happily await your new chapters


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  • From ANON - on October 26, 2016
    My god linclon just go full nihilistic on Luna. but dude I hope the next chapter would make him better or made him more emo but anyway dude keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - on October 25, 2016

    It's getting better and better. Great work. Dark, steamy, fanatic character personality. Please keep writing.


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  • From ANON - Anonman on October 17, 2016

    Really good story, hope you continue it.


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  • From ANON - Big Brother on October 13, 2016

    Chapter 2.

     

    Not bad.


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