Reviews for The Loud House of LoveBy : ThunderMoonBear |
Oh, man. I was waiting incredibly impatiently for this installment. You already have me hooked. I love your character developement. You have the Loud family interact in a believable way, which is a challenge for some. One niggle, I sometimes have to pause to figure out who's talking. Other than that, it's perfect. I eagerly await the next chapter.
Great story i have enjoyed it but like lori in the story i don't want it to end i think after lincoln has his turn with all his sisters you could still keep the story going beyond that since all his sisters will probably be like lori and never want their relationship with lincoln to end so i hope even after once all the sisters have had their turn with lincoln the story will keep going
I got to ask where is the next chapter? I thought the next chapter would have been up by now especially after seeing the note on the last chapter.
This is an amazing story, I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter which will hopefully be posted soon.
Does leni or all his sisters want to be treated like Lori was and when it comes to the comedian sister turn maybe she could make a treasure map so Lincoln follows it to find her on all fours or bent over with her butt facing she looks over her shoulder looking at Lincoln and say time to collect your booty lol
It's a good thing Lisa gave him that drink to be able to take on all his sisters and all their holes plus still be able to cover them with his sperm whenever they spread their legs for him, and when he's done he'll always have the energy for more even if the sisters can't go on even though having the satisfaction face I described while unconscious from the sex would make any guy want to go another round with them, so they just accidentally created a sex maniac where no girl or woman Lincoln wants is safe. Hope this review didn't upset anyone
Since Lincoln can make Lori's eyes roll back just from oral sex maybe when they have actual sex Lori's eye's not only rolled back but her mouth is open with her tongue out moaning like a bitch in heat and thinks that who needs Bobbie the boy when she has Lincoln the animal, Lincoln the man or Lincoln her master
This story is awesome. I can't wait to read more.
I like where this is going. Can't wait to read more
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