A great start! Can't wait for more. Feels like an actual episode. Unlike Lincoln I would totally be okay with getting the girls' period products. Where did you come up with the idea for this story? Keep it up bro! You can contact me at:Pepsifreak87@yahoo.com. I tend to answer pretty quickly. 

i really love the way yo made the occupant of the loud hose retain thier original characteristics, like lincoln reading comiics in his underwar, luan lame jokesa and lisa extensive sentences, it really made the story more interesting. cant wait for more.

Maybe the girl genius only had time to make one cure for her so she can focus on making more and made something for Lincoln to help satisfy all the girls urges like giving him twelve inches and thick as a wrist with enough energy to satisfy all his sisters holes and when the girls See Lincoln new endowment they're all eagerly submissive after the girls are cured they had the memories erased but Lincoln and his new endowment and energy is permanent. is this idea ok

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Chapter 2 – SPOILERS!

First and foremost, Lisa's line "I can do a lot of things," still haunts me.

It's clear that the chemical is affecting her, she knows it, and she's even willingly giving into the urges. Maybe she really can attenuate the horniness effect by giving in to them a little, but it true that highly intelligent people are better at rationalizing their emotional & primal feelings and actions. Even her keeping Lincoln trapped in the house, instead of sending him out the emergency slide before activating the blast shields, is suspect to me. (BTW, also hilarious work on having blast shields, especially since you hadn't heard of Rick and Morty when writing that.)

Cutting off all communications did seem like Lisa was concerned for her sisters' safety and reputations more than anything, but it just so happens that now Lincoln has no options for help other than her now, no matter what.

“Very sneaky, sis.”

As for Lily, I thought she was going to get a complete pass (to the chagrin of people who wanted to see her involved), and I think you handled the delicate balance there with great elegance and fair satisfaction for everyone's tastes.

Lola's call was awesome, especially describing "a dash of menace" for her usual tone. Her dialogue had me expecting something good to begin with, but then Lincoln's priceless reaction and broken-up description gave me a perfect mental image of how the little beauty queen had prettied herself up for her dear brother; then the part about focusing on her wiggling bottom just to get more of a rise out of him made it even more delicious. (Also, talking with her butt is very much Jim Carrey approved.) The other girls' comments from outside the door were quite nice, with Lucy's being especially cute for her personality and Luna's boldness. Lana offering to use her handy skills to solve the problem efficiently was a nice twist, so I guess the girls don't want to get in trouble for breaking the house even if they end up breaking Lincoln. (His back, his sexual organs, his psyche, his will to live...)

Nice soliloquy for this chapter, especially about it not being his sisters' fault except Lisa, though her trick to distract the other sisters and get him to her lab was priceless. That also seems to solidify the fact that the pheromone induces actual heterosexual mating, not just a desire for sex or orgasms. The girls could easily give themselves or one-another all of that if pure horniness was the only effect. Man, I'm again impressed with Lisa's abilities, considering how much specificity there is to the chemical's effect.

The whole "Lana the bloodhound" bit was played out beautifully, in perfect cartoon style to the biscuit at the very end. Good thing she can't bark out the phrase that Lisa's got her hand on Lincoln's butt or that door wouldn't last an instant.

So much for my big thought about how Lisa would try to counteract the chemical: After Luan's embarrassment when she licked the pie off of Lincoln, I wondered if perhaps the lemon (or something else in the pie) was interfering with the pheromone a little and that it would turn out to be a clue of how to make a suppressant that would last until the pheromone wore off. Now, judging by Lisa's exposition, it does seem that the girls do have moments of semi-lucidity about their actions after the fact and be capable of a little shame. (But what's incest without shame? ;) )

So I guess for now the part about "a Loud pounding" won't just apply to Lisa & Lily's bedroom door. :)

Thanks for another awesome chapter and making me crave more.

it's so good I hope it keeps going :D

Wonderful and awesome story. :) I wonder what will happen when the girls come back to their senses.

The story is great so far and I can't wait to read more, I also like how you watch and get info from the show so you can use it in your stories like the underwear thing with Luna, anyway I think your other stories are great too but I hope to see more of this one.

(Disclaimer: I'm the beta reader.)

SPOILERS!

Chapter 1 is off to a great fun start. Good job on the narration and what a perfect way for a day off to suddenly turn into one of the most-embarrassing chores for a boy. (Though it sounds like he's fairly used to it by now, which makes sense.) Great work on the sensory breakdown as he made his way back to his room and smelled the pie, and then Luan's "unusual" way of wiping it off of his neck was the first not-so-subtle indication that something was awry in the Loud House. The way she got embarrassed and made a lame joke while making her escape was fun, and my thought is that she's still young enough where she's not as affected by whatever concoction Lisa cooked up for Pythagoras (or wasn't exposed enough to it... or maybe there's something else you're saving for later ;) ).

However it was awesome to see that Luna wasn't fighting the effect at all; and if not for getting the hint by then Lynn would have been fighting him out of his underpants if he hadn't been one step ahead. Cute of Lucy to be two-steps ahead and waiting for her favorite sibling with such a sweet poem, but luckily he was able to get her out without Lynn being able to bust in. (And the fact that Lucy was so affected, though still meekly, gives me a second hint about what you may have up your sleeve.)

Then Lisa showing up was fun because we didn't know yet whether she was making her move on the boy, though once she explained her predicament and Lincoln reminded her that human females would be affected by her chemical too then the use of the title was downright awesome.

Now I'm really looking forward to seeing how Lincoln will remain safe in such a known and vulnerable place in the house, or if he can make a break for it. The only thing that's certain is that Clyde will be kicking himself when he realizes that he could have ditched the math tournament and "accidentally" gotten between Lori and Lincoln at some point. Oh well. :)

Awesome. Totally and absolutely awesome. Love that Lisa did not think things through and realize "Hey, the super-phermomone will probably work on me and every other female in the house as well!"

Wow poor lincon now he has to deal with his sisters un intesional delema the older ones i undestand but why lucy is she mature alredy or did she had some kind of feelings for lincon that were inhance by the pheramon cant wsiy and see what you come up with for the next chapter