And, I applaude you.

Why? You've managed to capture each girl in such a fashion, that each one of them so far has felt unique, and not as a re-do of others or in some cases, the same girl.

Luna's anthics with music and rithm, Luan (who's probably going to come back for more, as she hasn't actually had complete sex with him... unlike her sisters.) And Lynn are so different, and each moved by a different but quite poignant theme, that it's refreshing despite how short the sex is. 

I saw Lisa taking care of Lincoln and the girls, it's obvious that she's still working hard to make things slightly less painfull for all of them... Though, Lincoln might need to drink some liquids soon, maybe another batch of chemicals to prevent the consecuense of such an amount of excercise.

And... Lucy. I wonder if what she had said will have some consequences, I mean, they're all aware of their actions, even if hypersexualized. And Lucy so far has been the only one that doesn't want to simply fuck and get over it to satiate her need, but she wants to be loved... which might force some of the girls to think about what they're doing, changing their second session with Lincoln, especially the pace.

But I have the feeling that maybe you don't want to enlarge the story too much, as it gets slightly hard to do in such a fashion. Still, you've always managed to ensure at least good amount of advance in the characters on all your stories, even develop them further due to the consecuences of their actions... I hope to read more of this soon.

Sorry for the long wait. Hope you can update soon.
 

And finally, it drops...

So, they're aware. Just in overdrive, their impulses so strong that they don't care about the consequences of what they're about to do, they just want to appeace the drive.

And, poor Lincoln... he's currently pumped to the brims with drugs and natural chemicals, and while what he's doing is probably going to make him feel guilty for a few minutes, I guess the pleasure is going to make it all better... for a while at least.

I'm also wondering if Lisa's going to take into consideration chaffing, Lincoln is going to severely damage his skin with so much action... is she going to counteract such a thing with a cream? humectant? Salve? Something that not only manages to alleviate the slight burn of overused skin, but also repair and obviously enhance the pleasure of those that might or not be too... tight for such activities?

I loved Luna... my mind is enjoying this fic, more for what they're doing and how goofy and cartoony it's. For some reason, the tune and rithm of Luna's was in my mind a variation of porn/funky of Something about us of Daft Punk. Curious, because it's a more guitar bass song, than guitar which seems it's the instrument she's playing at.

I wonder as well, are there going to be repeats among the girls with a more slow and loving pace and less neurotic needy movements? Lori seemed partially done, but I wonder if she's going to come back for more, or she's really completely done... and yes, you're obviously doing each girl quite fast, but still quite believable under the circunstances...

Hell... you're going to get a lot of flak due to how young some of the characters are.

Now, It's interesting that Lisa is actually far more sociable than the usual trope of boy/girl genious/prodigy. Her lisp/tick is also quite adorable when it comes out, and you do it well enough without overusing it.

Now I wonder, how aware are the girls of what they're doing? It's just a mindless desire, or the pheromones are overworking their sexual drive to such a extense, that they actually don't care about what they're doing, they just want release, and Lincoln is obviously the only male available.

Also... I'm quite curious, it's slightly improbable that from such an amount of girls, none of them had displayed so far homosexual/bisexual desires. Is Lincoln the only one that's going to get pursued? It seems so... Also, I'm quite curious why the pheromone doesn't affect him, I mean, while it's devised to enhance his own, the girls are in overdrive... they should be expelling their own mutation of the pheromone, or their regular one with such a huge amount of girls... he should at least be slightly affected, though, he's full of chemicals right now due to his panic, so I guess that's countering some of the effects.

So, Lisa's the a less assholery version of "Dexter"... I guess she's far more sociable than the redhead used to be, though, she apparently is as irresponsable as the "original" cartoon genious.

I must confess that Lincoln persona is slightly annoying with his tendency to break the fourth wall. Which apparently is canonical, and done in a more humorous sense. I guess I'll have to get accustomed to it, at least you do it with some modicum of sense and the commentaries end up adding more to the story than substracting or breaking the pace, which is good.

Apparently you're going with a slow burn story, good. At least you're not jumping ahead into the sex, as I might need to get the gist of every character and their traits. The video you left helped a lot, but I prefer to read and grasp them.

I commited the mistake of reading other stories before yours, to compare... and Good Lord... the angst, the fandom is already filling with a good amount of angst, which is... kind of tiresome in the long run, especially as the authors hasn't updated in a while, or doesn't seem all that interested in updating or advancing further than they already are.

Then, there's the other story, which apparently the author is bitting more than he could deliver with a frustratingly slow story that's trying to give way too much attention to too many characters... which is why I'm hoping you don't commit the same mistake, the series seems interesting, not as much as SvsFOE, but apparently good enough for a laugh or two, and obviously, a good amount of porn.

Let's see how you manage to deal with so many characters, and not make it bothersome or downright boring.

“I need you to make love with me.” I love this line.

Really well put together story 

So Lucy wants her mouth, pussy and ass stretched so wide open that Lincolns dick is the only one that can fill it and make her feel like a virgin every time as she squeezes him like one too, cool.

Great chapter.

Now Lincoln has no way out.

Poor Lincoln, haha.

This is the greatest story i have ever read, this story is just as good as another comic i read, called Lincoln Louder (check it out!) but sadly i think got abandoned but is quite a long nsfw story. I love the loud stories that include all the sisters and this was very entertaining to read and kept me wanting more. I hope you make more stories after you finish this especially ones like these!

Awesome first chapter. The dialogue was kept very in-character and I hope you can maintain it through out the story. I also love the buildup you have going, though I hope it doesn't take to long for the Loud sisters to get their hands on Lincoln :) 

great story i am guessing lori regrets what she has done but i am guessing not all of the them will regret it i hope even after they all have their turn with lincoln they will still want him in the same way and i hope the story will keep going after they have all had their turn with lincoln i am enjoying it

The formula in chapter 3 may have been Lisa's plan B*, but I give it an A+. I knew something was up the moment she said Lincoln had to receive the formula because the problem was with the sisters. (Sure, the injection could have made him register to the girls as "not a man" or something, I suppose, but this is a lemon after all. :))

Also, great to hear her "I can do a lot of things" again, especially in this context. :D

The intensity of the girls' desire for him was portrayed fantastically, so matter-of-fact and even with the realization that it was wrong. Lori saying as much and then ignoring it until after the first turn with Lincoln was great, and even better that with them knowing that all of the other sisters were watching eagerly too. No jealousy is certainly a plus, and the way Lori and Leni were able to get back to normal afterwards was a good sign. (Then again, that hamster is still on the loose in the vents, so…)

Good thing Lisa included some anti-anxiety medication in the "save Lincoln's ass from dying from too much ass" formula. The bit about them being Catholic was perfectly timed and just a beautiful thing. The bit about Lincoln being smooth was cool too, but given his life situation he would have some good instincts when it comes to making girls happy apart from sexually. Leni's talking would drive most people to softness, if not insanity, but he made it work. The bits of detail for each climax are a sweet payoff for all the wonderful build up to now, and being to-the-point works well with so many girls lined up and waiting.

Great job on so many little jokes throughout too. Having Luna provide a soundtrack to the event was funny, and Lola's remark about Lana's overalls was fantastic. (I'm glad you ignored the first rule of Fight Cloud in this case. ;)) Lisa's bits of humor were great too, especially the flavor of the special painkiller for the occasion. (Good thing too because regular NSAIDs can dull sexual response.)

Best of all, you've left me satisfied but still wanting so much more. Thanks for another great installment of this happy tale.

*Speaking of "Plan B" I hope Lisa can whip some up for her older sisters so they don't end up having even more kids in that cramped house.

WOOT WOOT! Good to see you're back at it. Hopefully, more people start showing some love to this show. The story pool is really small right now, but I have faith in rule #34. I really like how well you translate the characters to keep them believable in your story. A thought to consider, do you recall the episode (chore and peace, I think?) Where Lisa was riding a tentacle from a monster she created as it helped her clean the house? Just a thought, might be fun to experiment with that one.