Reviews for Requiem for a DragonBy : cartoon_romanceXXX |
I gotta say I don't read much adjl stories foucsing on Haley like this, it's a nice change of pace to read a good detailed story that focuses on what going through her mind and such so I really hope to see more of this.
You're just tormenting the poor girl. Stop that.^_^
Thank you for the complements ANON with regards to your opinion that I am writing Haley in character, I do my best! As for Jake's age, allow to explain. When the show started Jake was indeed 13-year's old, however during the course of the show Jake turned 14. We know due to the speech Haley makes to her Granfarther and Sun Park about how they have been pushing Jake way to hard in the second to last episode of the series Being human where she states that Jake is a 14-year old boy. Now, in the final episode episode Jonathan Long finds out about his families secret, that his children and Susan's other relatives are all dragons, her being the exception of course where it skipped a generation. I establish in chapter 2 when Jonathan sees Haley transform that it has been about a year since he found out, hence this fic is set 1-year after the final episode and so Jake is now 15.
Interesting to see this entirely from Haley's point of view. Though there has been little dialog, she seems in character. Hoping to find that her feelings for Jake are mutual. Although I thought Jake was 13, not 15. Regardless, this story is going well, looking forward to where it goes.
Maybe Haley could dream of Jake having Haley face down and ass up on his bed with her arms tied behind her back and a gag in her mouth so the mom and dad won't hear Haley moan or scream "oh yes jake fuck me" by the looks of the story Haley wants to be dominanted by Jake well I say let him Haley will love it
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