Reviews for Darkness RisingBy : Jarkota |
Very cool
I apologize for being extremely late to reviewing this and responding (this is Alex Brossart btw) but I love your story
My apologies for late reply i forgot about this website been using AO3 I really like this story and was surprised to see "encounters" (the sequel) by the way this is Alexander brossart I spent 15 minutes creating a new account until I get old one fixed.
You still working on this series
I really love the storyline. I feel like it`s part of his force powers or something that gets him all the girls. I just finished all 3 today and was upset that i have to wait for the next one. Keep up the great work.
Good story I like it. I thank you for lowering the times they use the word master and slave. Second thanks for the KOTOR Reference. Third I think this doesn't pop nor mentioned but wanted to mention it anyway Sabine should not be a nudist, all the time, just a few times or somethimes.
good wrap up to this portion of the story. looking forward to seeing where you take this next time. as always great use of characters, their growth, and expanding relationships. great stuff!
I'm really enjoying where you're going with this. The KOTOR nostalgia is touching my withered soul :3 Keep it up my dude
Loved KOTOR reference
Good
Love the story, hope to see it continued more soon. I rather like that you are pulling in bits from KOTOR and ForceAwakens to help mix things up in Rebels, makes for a better story for sure.
loved the chapter, lots of emotion running in that last bit as Ahsoka realized Vader's secret... great stuff, keep it coming!
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