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Reviews for To the victor the spoils

By : Fanfictionfan360
  • From The_Desert_Dancer on May 15, 2017

    Awesome work, mate. Loved how slutty Gaz was and how much she enjoyed that cock. Keep up the good work!


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  • From Sketchfan on March 17, 2016
    Lucky fucking bastard. Best keep in mind he is gaz' bitch now. Finally someone does a fox of gaz based on the artwork of bigdad/darnact nicely done
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  • From ANON - RagingDemon on December 17, 2015
    I like your Poke'mon fics, but thanks to FA artist BigDad, I can imagine your Gaz stories in almost perfect detail. More like this, please!
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  • From Jackal on December 16, 2015
    Great story, much prefer Gaz on human and hope there'll be more of that to come (possibly with your OC, not saying you should go romantic and not saying you shouldn't I just like him is all). Love that she's both a size queen and a power bottom.

    Critique time so feel free to skip this part. Punctuation didn't really bother me but it was missing. The big one was I felt there was a lack of detail both during and not during the sex. Example, "As his dick shot cum all over Gaz's face and tits she quickly opened her mouth and cupped her breasts together to catch as much as she could. Her eyes remained open to watch his cock twitch as it deposited its payload all over her." or maybe she kept her eyes open cause she likes the sting I dunno. Point is I felt things could've been described more in depth.
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  • From ANON - Ferklez on December 15, 2015
    :)
    I like. Good. Very good.
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