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Reviews for Smutty Universe

By : AmberSerpentine
  • From TheAllSeeingEye on March 08, 2018

    this is not continuing is it? thats a shame i really liked this story


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  • From TheAllSeeingEye on October 21, 2016

    i hope this story continues, i want to see what kind of "training" peral has in mind


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  • From glib24 on September 20, 2016

    A very well written story, feels true to the charactes. :)


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  • From ANON - nemo1991 on September 09, 2016

    plz continue this!


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  • From ANON - Anon on August 22, 2016

    I do hope you haven't abandoned this story.


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  • From ANON - Matthew Williams on August 18, 2016

    This is a hot and sexy story! When will you update it?


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  • From ANON - russell newhall on May 10, 2016
    this is the best story i've ever read. plz continue!
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  • From ANON - torrasque666 on May 10, 2016
    Love it. I want more. Please tell me there's more?
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  • From ANON - neo4812 on April 13, 2016
    PLZ continue this amazing story!
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  • From Lunarsilver on March 04, 2016
    Maybe Connie could like how hot it would be to lose her virginity to Steven while pearl instructed and watched as well join in not just the idea of Steven taking multiple women
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  • From lb54 on December 26, 2015
    You know what would make this story better? "A Very Smutty Christmas Special" :P
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  • From lb54 on November 08, 2015
    I second ForgetMeNaught's review, and raise with my own high five!
    Though Robbie has a point. Besides Amethyst possibly, it feels like it's going to be tricky involving the gems at all, or even just Pearl. But, whatever way you go will probably be well written and I know I'll enjoy it.
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  • From inaba on November 05, 2015
    so no one is gonna say anything about a missing chapter then?
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  • From ANON - Ronnie on November 04, 2015
    This fic would be great... if it ended halfway through chapter four. You clearly do understand the characters, Steven and Connie especially- but you lost me at the idea of Pearl at all enjoying sex. She hates biological functions, even the ones humans enjoy like eating, why would she like sex?
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  • From ANON - ForgetMeNaught on November 04, 2015
    Well, having made time to sit and read, I can't say I'm unimpressed.

    Young sexual exploration is often a tricky thing; as adults writing that material, it's easy to not only miss out on the more important nuances of evolving innocence, but the biggest problem of all is, frankly, the outright corruption of the process to meet our own needs. I feel you avoided both of those pitfalls skillfully, achieving most solid results. High five.

    More than that, though, I love what you've done to discuss the nature of sex in Gem-Human relations, especially in Chapter 4's discussion of Pearl's fusion history with Rose. It brings up the idea of empathic sexual bliss on a whole new level, since gems share that magical metaconsciousness in their fused states. Imagine someone you love having a most robust orgasm, and feeling that in your whole being while you yourself are within and without that process. That's what you're telling us to think of.

    So yeah. Another high five for you.

    See you post-5.
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